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Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 6:23 pm
by particle-jim
Lye Form wrote:I think this is really nice so i'm going to be a bit critical & say what i would do with this personally (might be 100% against what you are trying to do):
Sounds too clean - i would saturate shit and make everything a bit more.... grimy.
Lose the gun sample imo.
The main synth sound needs tweeking - i would make it 'squarer'. also you could try layering it (-12 -24) detuned etc, and playing with volume of each channel to give it some power - you can also play with eqs to give it movement. also layering it with distorted 808s would give it a more 'genuine' grime feel.
the clap could do with a grime snare layered on it (google 'wiley snares') or just cut snares out of old grime tunes (yeah cannibalism of genres etc blah blah)
I would work on giving it more space, slow it down, lots of edits to give interesting pauses and shit.
Yeah I've lost the gunshots and changed the bass synth too, sounding a lot fiercer already, will post newer version when I get chance, I'll look into snares too
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 6:32 pm
by hubb
qloo -roobix qoob
fetch a pipe
http://snd.sc/ZuAVK9
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 7:48 pm
by nowaysj
Yes, but I'm an organ whore.
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:18 pm
by hubb
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:38 pm
by didi
JizzMan wrote:
fuckin ell m8
would love a 320, a 430 even
Cheers man. Sure about the 320, it's still unfinished, but I'll send it round when I'm done.
First time anyone (outside friends) has asked for one of my tracks.
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:58 pm
by Jizz
haha, moving up the ranks!
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 3:49 am
by particle-jim
dididub wrote:JizzMan wrote:
fuckin ell m8
would love a 320, a 430 even
Cheers man. Sure about the 320, it's still unfinished, but I'll send it round when I'm done.
First time anyone (outside friends) has asked for one of my tracks.
I'm gunna have to ask for a 320 too actually, large track
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:08 pm
by syrup
some good stuff being posted round here, Jizzman, that dog thing is siiick
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:00 pm
by particle-jim
Here's an updated version of that grime bit, still nowhere near finished but a lot closer to what i was originally aiming for, the feedback and advice has been so helpful, thanks
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Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:11 pm
by lloydy
I'd low pass that bass sound,bring the cuttoff to around halfway and resonance up till you get a bit of a dirtier wub bass.
Not a fan of grime but nice track Jim
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:16 pm
by nowaysj
Sine sub under that unless I'm missing something entirely on this lappy. Envelope on what lloydy of london said.
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:17 pm
by lloydy
nowaysj wrote:Sine sub under that unless I'm missing something entirely on this lappy. Envelope on what lloydy of london said.
Milton Keynes actually,it's like a shit version of London lol
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:07 am
by Gewze
going to use this double post for jim, the tunes sounds much better than last time, well done man
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:08 am
by Gewze
particle-jim wrote:dididub wrote:JizzMan wrote:
fuckin ell m8
would love a 320, a 430 even
Cheers man. Sure about the 320, it's still unfinished, but I'll send it round when I'm done.
First time anyone (outside friends) has asked for one of my tracks.
I'm gunna have to ask for a 320 too actually, large track
lloydy wrote:I'd low pass that bass sound,bring the cuttoff to around halfway and resonance up till you get a bit of a dirtier wub bass.
and some of that!
made this earlier today, my daw says 3 hours of work so im well happy with that. been trying to up my work rate recently
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Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 2:55 am
by Figment
Gewze wrote:going to use this double post for jim, the tunes sounds much better than last time, well done man
nice one Jim, sounding sick, you made those idea's into something wicked.
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 11:25 am
by Jizz
johney wrote:some good stuff being posted round here, Jizzman, that dog thing is siiick
thanks man. Patiently waiting to hear more ITM from you...
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:25 pm
by didi
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 7:30 pm
by Johoosh
Found a few interesting 'world' samples so bashed this out today, 104 BPM:
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Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 8:18 pm
by Dystinkt
impressive stuff so far guys
my latest tune, not finished and on a deep tip
EDIT- finished it
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Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:32 pm
by ehbes
-Cheeky like it but if it was me id layer the hats up a bit, but that just personal i like kinda weighty hats i guess
alrighty now, not really what is classify this as other than its 130 bpm, any advice is welcome
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