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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:03 am
by miniweapon
THEUNIK wrote:Hello
First time on this forum, BTW happy new year to everybody !
Here you can listen my dubstep tune :
http://www.myspace.com/adrienunik second track on the player called "GIMME SOME"
Feedback are welcome
cheers
Adrien.
Nice work man you got some good stuff!
really feelin the grime
check out some of my tracks and tell me what you think.
myspace.com/grimelabs
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:27 am
by _v_
quite enjoyed that mate, the word "pummeled" comes to mind
wicked stuff!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:29 am
by _v_
vulvavibration wrote:finished up that track... now, what confuses me is, that on my monitors and the club rig the sub sounds really great , heavy and gives pressure to the chest.
but on almost any other system it has no pressure and the rhythm of the sub can't be heard (it should actually accentuate the main beat)
would love to hear some feedback! (and yes, will give back

)
big up and thank you
Soundcloud
liked that one... my vibe dark and haunting....love the breaks, beats, vocal, atmospheres, brooding deep basslines... just my kinds tune..
great work!!!
only one thing I would say is perhaps bring the rehabilitated sample in at least one more time towards the first half of the tune......
actually no Ive changed my mind...... its great as it is, think ive listened 3-4 times now!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:41 am
by phrex
thank you man!
much appreciated!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:10 am
by kierz
Sampled an old school rave track then mashed into dubstep after the drop, kinda like doctor p - sweet shop style:
http://soundcloud.com/kovu/head-in-the- ... l-mix-kovu
What do you think?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:13 am
by kierz
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
i would :LOVE some feedback on this tune i just finished idk if its anything good yet
This tune is brilliant, would love to hear this at the end of a night when I'm coming down to bring me back up!
commented it on your soundcloud aswell!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:42 am
by Tragic_Gash
made this out of samples of random crap in the house and the garden, and snow

cept for the sub, the rest is fooked up samples tho, see wat u reckon
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:42 am
by noizy parka
kierz wrote:tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
i would :LOVE some feedback on this tune i just finished idk if its anything good yet
This tune is brilliant, would love to hear this at the end of a night when I'm coming down to bring me back up!
commented it on your soundcloud aswell!
Nice little track man, good production, aint no banger thats for sure. But a nice track
Big up the man dem Tripwire
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:27 pm
by the shadow
@Tragic Gash- That tune made out the house and garden noises or whatever- wow. When it first came on I didnt know what to think, and then as it progressed I really liked the swing of the beat and the sub bass fits really nicely. It actually reminded me of something burial might do!
The intro before the bass comes in does need a little tweeking- its a bit too harsh and made me think what the hell is this?? but as the tune goes on the clicks and that droning sound are just incredible.
A great song and truly unique!
Could you listen to my track 'nuclear winter' on my soundcloud and give a little feedback
Cheers
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:16 pm
by noizy parka
Tragic Gash wrote:made this out of samples of random crap in the house and the garden, and snow

cept for the sub, the rest is fooked up samples tho, see wat u reckon
Soundcloud
Good work mate, lot of thought and effort. a bit more work on the EQ perhaps but i think a lot of tunes are the same at this level? nice tribal vibe.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:25 pm
by jsaxton
Tragic Gash wrote:made this out of samples of random crap in the house and the garden, and snow

cept for the sub, the rest is fooked up samples tho, see wat u reckon
Soundcloud
other than that horrible noize when it breaks in i really like this track
maybe it wouldnt sound so hrrible if it was quiter?
sounds slightly 2step and dread i say it future garage?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:28 pm
by dedman
easssy guys! thanks for the feedback on the last one... got another pretty much done tune, needs your guys feedback still though
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:19 pm
by noizy parka
dedman wrote:easssy guys! thanks for the feedback on the last one... got another pretty much done tune, needs your guys feedback still though
Soundcloud
sounding heavy mate.. standard wobl bizness
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:21 pm
by tripwire22
an old song bit full of feedback keys and a drum beat idk if i want it to be any long than this its pretty short though
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:26 pm
by noizy parka
Still trying for some Crit on these before i bust out the rave goggles and dive in for a final mixdown, all appreciated !
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:29 pm
by tripwire22
@noizy. both tracks are pretty good man i wouldnt change the 1st one at all and bring the bass growl sound up just a tad in the 2nd one
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:34 pm
by noizy parka
Cheers man... Cant seem to get soundcloud to play anymore on works tinterweb so will give yours a listen when i get home mr Trip...
nice one
EDIT... it loaded at last, nice vibes as always man...
Maybe there is a frequency cut that you could do on the snare so it keeps its impact but sounds a tad less harsh, i would also add a few sporadic dirty noises to the bottom end perhaps?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:39 pm
by Tragic_Gash
the shadow wrote:@Tragic Gash- That tune made out the house and garden noises or whatever- wow. When it first came on I didnt know what to think, and then as it progressed I really liked the swing of the beat and the sub bass fits really nicely. It actually reminded me of something burial might do!
The intro before the bass comes in does need a little tweeking- its a bit too harsh and made me think what the hell is this?? but as the tune goes on the clicks and that droning sound are just incredible.
A great song and truly unique!
Could you listen to my track 'nuclear winter' on my soundcloud and give a little feedback
Cheers
thanks for the feedback

i think i will rework the intro a little sometime, the transistion isn't as smooth as i would like anyhows, so i'll soften it a little whilst i'm at it.
had a listen to Nuclear Winter, definitely digging the intro, sounds like some proper retro terminator soundtrack sheeeeet, however, wen u drop u lose all of the atmosphere u had in the intro

i would definitely try to explore ways in which u can keep the feeling of the intro going wen the tune tune drops. also maybe layer a sharper sounding over the b line and give it a more defined sound? hope that helps anyway
noizy parka wrote:Tragic Gash wrote:made this out of samples of random crap in the house and the garden, and snow

cept for the sub, the rest is fooked up samples tho, see wat u reckon
Soundcloud
Good work mate, lot of thought and effort. a bit more work on the EQ perhaps but i think a lot of tunes are the same at this level? nice tribal vibe.
Cheers man, js wondered what exactly u mean for me to do with an EQ? is it there are resonant frequencies that need reducing or like the general mix of freqs is out of balance? would definitely like to kno if u think somethin in the mix is out of balance, would be v helpful

cheers
jsaxton wrote:Tragic Gash wrote:made this out of samples of random crap in the house and the garden, and snow

cept for the sub, the rest is fooked up samples tho, see wat u reckon
Soundcloud
other than that horrible noize when it breaks in i really like this track
maybe it wouldnt sound so hrrible if it was quiter?
sounds slightly 2step and dread i say it future garage?
lol wat u tryin to say about my pseudo-kazoo mans? nah i'll definitely think about gettin rid of sum of the distortion...
it wasn't really intended to be garagey but ur right the rhythms do lend themselves to that feel
cheers for the feedback ery1
ez
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:43 pm
by Tragic_Gash
dedman wrote:easssy guys! thanks for the feedback on the last one... got another pretty much done tune, needs your guys feedback still though
Soundcloud
haha this is jokes, love the sample, can i get a 320 plox?

Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:51 pm
by noizy parka
Had a friend come round and lay some guitar down on this one for me,
Soundcloud
Crit welcome and apprieciated