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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 4:36 pm
by Sparks_[Productions]
machination wrote:machination wrote:a work in progress testing some new ideas that Critical Consciousness had...feedback MUCH appreciated!
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would appreciate some other people's thoughts on this one.
Not feeling the start of track but the bass is heavy.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 4:45 pm
by redjuan
@ alist-nice track loved the intro and progression of the track,not really my thing but i did like it.maybe id have prefered less wobbles and more of the sub coming out,but that is imo.Thanks for the feedback,i gladly leave any to anyone willing to listen and comment,cheers man
@ sparks-liked the dark vibe your goin for in this tune but ur bass sounds too distorted and overpowering imo,turn or filter it down perhaps.thanks for listening and feedback,J
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:04 pm
by tripwire22
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me just really fucking around but i kinda like it
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:37 pm
by globalbabylon
@psythe -metaphysic - I would lower or roll off some high end on the glitch percussion, it seems to overpower the drums in the mix. Needs more punch in the kick and more level on the drums all together. The mix in Predators is much more balanced. Love the snare in predators.
@ a paul - more progress- Drums are sitting way to low in the mix, no distinction.
@ JBE - Clean, like the bass. The intro rolls on a bit long for my taste. Really like the high end SFX sweeps.
@ redjuan - sick track, really like the vibe. Smooth, laidback style.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:44 pm
by globalbabylon
@ Tripwire - beneath the skin. Sick tune! Lush, full sound. Really feeling the vocals and the high end synth blips throughout. Very nice.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 6:27 pm
by freakah
globalbabylon wrote:@ Tripwire - beneath the skin. Sick tune! Lush, full sound. Really feeling the vocals and the high end synth blips throughout. Very nice.
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Like this tune man, could get the mixdown a bit tighter though IMO - snare's a bit loud, and the sick saw bass you got going on is a bit quiet, maybe bring down the snare, bring up the bass and sidechain everything just a lil bit to the kick/snare - will give it a bit of punch. Might just be my personal taste but I think that snare doesn't quite fit somehow - might be the levels!
Sounding wicked so far though!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 6:37 pm
by Sparks_[Productions]
Track sounding good i feel that the snare does work in the track vocal sounds good as well.
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Any Feedback appreciated.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 7:03 pm
by Funicular
@freakah
Really like the sounds of that toon. I would love to see what it evolves into but it has already got me grooving. That flowing bassline is beastly.
Heres my current WIP any feedback would be great.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 7:23 pm
by freakah
Funicular wrote:@freakah
Really like the sounds of that toon. I would love to see what it evolves into but it has already got me grooving. That flowing bassline is beastly.
Heres my current WIP any feedback would be great.
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Cheers man, that's what I like to hear! Will get it finished sometime! Keep an eye out for it on my soundcloud and hit me up when it's up there and I'll hook you up!
Your tune's sounding original man, like how you've got a talkin synth that isn't all this rinsed bitcrushed stuff. Mixdown wise, for me the trumpets are a bit loud, and IMO the kick/snare are a bit weak, layer them up with more hits, and sidechain everything to kick/snare to get some punchy business gwan! Bringing in a nice light ride in the background after the drop would help make it sound larger I think as well, but love the melodies and pads/bass sounds you got gwan! soundin large!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 7:29 pm
by Psythe
@globalbabylon Thanks for the feedback im for sure going to balance the mix. Your track is pretty sick like the mechanic saw bass and the vocals do fit well like they said little sidechain work and it will be a great track.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 7:30 pm
by globalbabylon
@ frekah - like the synth melody, kind of a new school breaks vibe. Drums sound good, well balanced.
@ spark - Would like to hear the other range of frequencies filled out, some high end synths or sfx, some midrange, ect. Its a bit flat right now as everything seems to sit at the low end.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 8:38 pm
by jaspervc
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 10:05 pm
by ponte_ricky
new track i've been working on. any feedback and criticism would be appreciated. thanks
http://soundcloud.com/rickyparrish/kind ... ed-new-dub
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 12:15 am
by boyswanstep
@ponte - nice mann really liking that minimal style
anyone have a listen of this tune? only a little clip
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 5:14 am
by CBK81
Here's a little something in progress. Not much to it at all yet. Haven't even mixed it at all. For some reason soundcloud always makes my shit sound muddy.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 7:43 am
by vw63notch
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 7:49 am
by JBE
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 10:52 am
by ponte_ricky
yeah man minimal is how i like it. i need to tweak it a bit but its kinda done, the structure and all the parts are there anyway
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 2:42 pm
by engol
@ A-List = i like it, but i need more bass, those vocals go really well with the rest, I like the melody.. hmmm 320 maybe? ill even drop it on my ipod coz i got some shitty speakers atm
here is mine, not finished but tell me what u think, ending still shitty, drop at 3:05 imo is really good;p
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:41 pm
by Funicular
@freakah thanks for the great feedback. you are definetley right about my drums, but good to hear your liking it