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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:27 pm
Sick track dude!!cloak and dagger wrote:Would love peoples' thoughts on this...kind of a dubstep / hip hop hybrid thing.
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:36 pm
Awesome track there mate!CollisionCourse wrote:@ continuumdnb
thta track sounds nice, i think it would roll better if you added a different hat pattern or make them louder at 1.22, or maybe a ride or something, to really make it nod your head. try some distortion on the bassline aswell, either that or make it completely sub. this is all my opinion, just to try it out. i love the sample btw.
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that is sick!!! reminds of flylo alot, the melodies are too sick, drums are smooth. i really like this, big up!
this ones mine, check it out please!
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:37 pm
thansk man! its a wip at the momentwirez wrote:Awesome track there mate!CollisionCourse wrote:@ continuumdnb
thta track sounds nice, i think it would roll better if you added a different hat pattern or make them louder at 1.22, or maybe a ride or something, to really make it nod your head. try some distortion on the bassline aswell, either that or make it completely sub. this is all my opinion, just to try it out. i love the sample btw.
@ cloak and dagger
that is sick!!! reminds of flylo alot, the melodies are too sick, drums are smooth. i really like this, big up!
this ones mine, check it out please!
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:11 pm
This track is grim as fuck, big ups!chicken wrote:Soundcloud
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:33 am
Well, Ive finally decided I need to put this tune down and call it a day. Ive been tweaking this thing and dicking around with it for bloomin' ages, and I finally got to something I was happy with and need to stop playing lol Keep thinking of things to change, but need to stop...
Anyhoo, I ended up being really happy with it. Got the finished article up on me soundcloud here:
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I think ive over listened it too, some bits just dont seem "right" anymore...but yeah would love to hear anything like that, especially keen to hear what people might have to say about the end. Spent a good while learning my way around some synths better, trying to get something along the lines of a growl in the mix! Never really make anything like that, but it felt like the tune needed it...
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Anyhoo, I ended up being really happy with it. Got the finished article up on me soundcloud here:
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I think ive over listened it too, some bits just dont seem "right" anymore...but yeah would love to hear anything like that, especially keen to hear what people might have to say about the end. Spent a good while learning my way around some synths better, trying to get something along the lines of a growl in the mix! Never really make anything like that, but it felt like the tune needed it...
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:29 am
thanks man really helpful feedback appreciate that. someone else mentioned the siren. the funny thing is is that its not actually a siren its what happens when you put a shit load of feedback plug ins onto one channel haha the parts where there is no siren is where the plug ins are by passed. it took me 3 evenings if you wanted to know lol. do u hav any tunes for feedback?SesG wrote:An impressive peice of work there, all the subtle changes and switch ups makes me think its taken you a coiple of weeks to get it all sitting right (although your probs gonna say you knocked it out in an evening now!)-hooky- wrote: Anoyone fancy taking a listen to mine would be appreciated and feedback will be returned
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All the buildup, work on the vocal, bubbly sounding synths are amazing - the riser thing happening in the drop is one of the best things I've heard since I've been browsing this forum and the bass itself was lilke being eaten alive all the gurgles and guttural sounds in there.
Only bad thing I can say is that the siren gets annoying in the break in the middle, sits amazing with the bass and should only be played with it (the panning on it works well with the straight up and down bass). Also the ending doesnt really feel like one, seems like there should be another drop after it but its no biggie.
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:48 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:46 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:49 am
Yeah buddy!
posted mine before i checked out the other tracks...
really liking this one, huge bass!
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:50 am
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eskmo, datsik, tipper, and shpongle were big influences on this one.
throw some constructive criticism my way pleasee
kthx
eskmo, datsik, tipper, and shpongle were big influences on this one.
throw some constructive criticism my way pleasee
kthx
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:03 am
No worries man thats siren just gets a bit annoying thats all - automation of the channel input/output faders would remove it surely?-hooky- wrote: thanks man really helpful feedback appreciate that. someone else mentioned the siren. the funny thing is is that its not actually a siren its what happens when you put a shit load of feedback plug ins onto one channel haha the parts where there is no siren is where the plug ins are by passed. it took me 3 evenings if you wanted to know lol. do u hav any tunes for feedback?
I've got a track that was posted about 3 posts after I reviewed yours called Dea don Arrival that I'm looking for feedback on if you wouldn't mind - http://soundcloud.com/ses-1/dead-on-arrival
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:12 am
cool track, that main synth was real nice. could have benefitted from a little more of that synth line that came in at the end...maybe try to get it to sound like a melodica 4 tr3w dub feel.chicken wrote:Soundcloud
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:29 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:40 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:56 am
nice track, the space sounds make it...maybe try thickening the main voice, or detuning it, adding a few doubled voices at different semitone intervals. good sound though.DstructO wrote:hoping to get some feed back..and feel free to download track at http://www.soundcloud.com
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:45 pm
Interesting, i really like the experimental vibe of this, your drums are great.
Might turn down that kick at 2.45 though, try massively lowpassing then sticking a bit of verb on it to try and get that heartbeat sound i think you were going for, at it's just a bit too in your face for a breakdown.
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:19 pm
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Done for now, If I spend to much time on it I'll fuck it up, come back in a few months and sand down the edges.
Feedbacking incoming asap.
Done for now, If I spend to much time on it I'll fuck it up, come back in a few months and sand down the edges.
Feedbacking incoming asap.
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:24 pm
I tend to post my tracks up in the Dubs section but if any of you guys want to check my tunes check my soundcloud page
http://soundcloud.com/dublemon
Criticism very much welcomed
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:31 pm
@aux - i enjoy the experimental feeling of this one ! Something funny about the snare tho..
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