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				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:17 pm
				by aux
				continuumdnb wrote:aux wrote:Soundcloud
got a weird one for you lot... 
Feed back welcome of course  

 
Interesting, i really like the experimental vibe of this, your drums are great.
Might turn down that kick at 2.45 though, try massively lowpassing then sticking a bit of verb on it to try and get that heartbeat sound i think you were going for, at it's just a bit too in your face for a breakdown.
Track in sig
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thanks for the feed back man, much appricate it. 
and yeah, i actually tried to do the heartbeat thing (spot on there on your guess), but i ended up taking it out, cuz i felt it was a bit "expected" and over used at times as a mood changer... so i prefer to roll it out and keep straight foward on the the second drop with a twist with the weird vox thing... still not sure about it all tho...
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:25 pm
				by aux
				vly wrote:@aux - i enjoy the experimental feeling of this one ! Something funny about the snare tho..
thanks for the feed back 

explain "funny"... is it like "haha" funny? or "HA" funny...?
lol... nah seriously... it is the actual tone/pitch of it that's a bit weird?  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:27 pm
				by CollisionCourse
				
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:50 pm
				by vly
				aux wrote:vly wrote:@aux - i enjoy the experimental feeling of this one ! Something funny about the snare tho..
thanks for the feed back 

explain "funny"... is it like "haha" funny? or "HA" funny...?
lol... nah seriously... it is the actual tone/pitch of it that's a bit weird?  

 
yea maybe its pitched somehow and it doesnt match the rest of the beat..  
 
but shouldnt be that hard to fix/change
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 7:15 pm
				by SesG
				Soundcloud
Just reupping this one as seemed to miss out on getting any feedback for it - will give feedback for feedback 

 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:07 pm
				by wirez
				Hey all.
Have a new track up for free download (or option to donate over paypal if you like it  
). It's a bootleg remix of Chemical Brothers - Hey Boy, Hey Girl. Hopefully I've done the track justice and haven't let it down at all, although I'm completely aware that little of the original remains  
 
Feel free to let me know what you think (in downloads or money  
)
Thanks! Here's the link (there is a player on the site as well as the download link)
http://whyrez.bandcamp.com/track/superstar-bootleg 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 9:21 pm
				by CollisionCourse
				@vly
really like that. intro is big, kinda generic sound of the wobble but its got a funky melody so it works. i like how the track progresses aswell, nice work!
@aux
again love the intro, the drums are crazy! the drop is nice, the bassline works well with the other sounds which it something i always find difficult. great variation of sounds and i love the sort of vocal change on the second drop. complex track, big up
@sesg
the distortion on the intro is sick, but i think it needs more variation in my opinion, maybe a few effects to light it up. not feeling the wobble, doesnt suit the heavyness of the track if that makes sense? like it needs more depth or something, or i might be just talking rubbish. it needs changing either way in my opinion. good so far though!
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:12 am
				by jsaxton
				jfloyd wrote:A New Peaches - Fuck the pain away remix...
any feedback appreciated  
 
Soundcloud 
not bad bruv, personally i thought the vocals maybe a wee bit over powering...
but thars preference
safe an  big ups!!!
 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:15 am
				by markie1210
				
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:36 pm
				by jsaxton
				
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:25 pm
				by penndragon
				Just produced this track...let me know what u think...cheers
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6svL1ra0s2U 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:39 pm
				by WeBang
				
Love both tunes you go there
 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:48 pm
				by zonetrooper5
				Finished my Blotter track, its now up on myspace so feel free to listen to it.  
 
http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords
Its also up on my soundcloud page if you hate myspace:
Soundcloud 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:07 pm
				by DubSac
				New track done. Some feedback would be awesome, I'm collaborating with RABBIT on this one, so the collab version will be done soonish. thanks guys!
Soundcloud 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:37 am
				by Astral
				
Nice arrangement, nice sounds. The woofers arnt going as mad as they're used to though.
DubSac wrote:New track done. Some feedback would be awesome, I'm collaborating with RABBIT on this one, so the collab version will be done soonish. thanks guys!
Soundcloud 
It's a nice track, but if it were mine, id fill it out a bit more, can feel empty at times. But that's the thing about opinions, they're subjective.
 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:51 am
				by Max4Beats
				
The intro is cool, but its a bit too easy to get distracted
0.44  The beat that comes in here is cool, really grime like
1.11 - 1.45 Didn't like having the break here
1.44 - 2.12  This is perfect from a grime track, it would be good with lyrics over it
2.13 - 3.46  The riff you brought in here was cool, but theres nothing there to grab your attention. No real lead, No bass line..... It's boring
3.46 - end  Same again... Nothing to keep you interested in the track. It's just to ambient, that percussive lead just doesn't work on a track without a bassline/Lead It needs to have Bars on it in order to make it a good track. But even with bars it has to have a bass line too, that BD is crying for a friend!
Good production but i found the track a bit boring
 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:02 am
				by CollisionCourse
				Max4Beats wrote:
The intro is cool, but its a bit too easy to get distracted
0.44  The beat that comes in here is cool, really grime like
1.11 - 1.45 Didn't like having the break here
1.44 - 2.12  This is perfect from a grime track, it would be good with lyrics over it
2.13 - 3.46  The riff you brought in here was cool, but theres nothing there to grab your attention. No real lead, No bass line..... It's boring
3.46 - end  Same again... Nothing to keep you interested in the track. It's just to ambient, that percussive lead just doesn't work on a track without a bassline/Lead It needs to have Bars on it in order to make it a good track. But even with bars it has to have a bass line too, that BD is crying for a friend!
Good production but i found the track a bit boring
 
glad you took the time to listen man! each to their own  

 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:06 pm
				by CDR
				Florence and the machine CDR REMIX
http://www.tracksandfields.com/songs.php?
please leave sum feedback and vote if poss...
THANKS
CDR!!!!!!!! 
  
  
  
 
			 
			
					
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				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:13 pm
				by penndragon
				
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:42 pm
				by Muta
				Soundcloud
My first attempt at dubstep :]
Made in Renoise. Not having much expierence in music production. (2 months or so.)
leave some feedback please!! I will give feedback in return  :]
Enjoy :]
~Muta
*Edit: if the player on here says: "Shoot! track currently not available or something aong those lines, here must be a working link:
http://soundcloud.com/mutadubstep/street-terrorism