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Max4Beats wrote:

Olux wrote:Hey Dubbers,

So i dont know if i've quite mastered mixing yet but here's a track i could really use some feedback on.

CHECK IT OUT @ http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/culture- ... x123htgf85

CHEERS!

Welcome

Cool Rhythms to start with, i like those wistley Cird like noises, Very tribal Jah Feel to it!
Need to toughen up that Bass Drum...
Pure Chilling song, Not what I was expecting
Wobble is bang on! Perfect
Love how its constantly changing
Breakdown after 2.14 is really cool and needed!
Work on the structure a bit. over 5 mins for a song like this is really long, hard to keep the interest, but with a re structure it would be a really cool tune!

Max4Beats wrote:

Muta wrote:Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/

Soundcloud

Thank you..

0.00 - 0.22 This is sounding cool
0.22 - 1.03 Cool like the bassline
1.05 - 1.34 I'd get rid of that Fruity Loops ride But this breakdown is great
1.49 - 2.19 Nice Change Here


Overall - Cool track, could still be a bit heavier and I'd get rid of that rhythm on the Ride, I really like the Pad sound at the end though


What you think of this one

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We Bang wrote:

CollisionCourse wrote:

CollisionCourse wrote:@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work.

@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.

heres my new one, check it out
Soundcloud
and heres my other one for those who missed it
Soundcloud
later

anyone?

@ CollisionCourse

Just gonna do a quick one on your Track "Null"

Intro is cool, Beat goes well!
Crazy pitch effects on the piano around 1 minute
The sub that drops after this is deep!!
Overall its a col track, I think you just need to ad something else over it, another riff as a hook or some vocal samples?
A hook anyway

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Both tracks are cool for the style. Nice drum work. Not simple tracks but not a whole lot going on

Temo wrote:

zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.

Soundcloud

If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.

pretty standard, the way youve put reverb on some of the sounds is quite intresting

zonetrooper5 wrote:

Temo wrote:

zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.

Soundcloud

If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.

pretty standard, the way youve put reverb on some of the sounds is quite intresting

That cool man, thanks for listening to it and why is the the reverb on some sounds intresting?

Do you have any tracks that you want to me to give feedback on?

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this please? I'll return the favor - don't worry!

ekoebeats wrote:Soundcloud

this is one of my fairly new ones looking to get a release on it i also have a vip up for grabs so holla, feedback appreciated

contact: darryl.cashford@googlemail.com

Worker Ant wrote:

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this please? I'll return the favor - don't worry!

I left some timed comments on the track for you. Sounds good to me. I like how the wobble comes into the first section. I posted a song, riddim and acapella above - please leave feedback if you want.

legend4ry wrote:Soundcloud

Will give feedback to anyone who gives me feedback, as usual.

Max4Beats wrote:

Max4Beats wrote:

Olux wrote:Hey Dubbers,

So i dont know if i've quite mastered mixing yet but here's a track i could really use some feedback on.

CHECK IT OUT @ http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/culture- ... x123htgf85

CHEERS!

Welcome

Cool Rhythms to start with, i like those wistley Cird like noises, Very tribal Jah Feel to it!
Need to toughen up that Bass Drum...
Pure Chilling song, Not what I was expecting
Wobble is bang on! Perfect
Love how its constantly changing
Breakdown after 2.14 is really cool and needed!
Work on the structure a bit. over 5 mins for a song like this is really long, hard to keep the interest, but with a re structure it would be a really cool tune!

Wana return feedback on this

Soundcloud

Muta wrote:

Max4Beats wrote:

Muta wrote:Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/

Soundcloud

Thank you..

0.00 - 0.22 This is sounding cool
0.22 - 1.03 Cool like the bassline
1.05 - 1.34 I'd get rid of that Fruity Loops ride But this breakdown is great
1.49 - 2.19 Nice Change Here


Overall - Cool track, could still be a bit heavier and I'd get rid of that rhythm on the Ride, I really like the Pad sound at the end though


What you think of this one

Soundcloud

FL Ride? xD Lol, And that while im using renoise lolol. I know it could be heavier, But im still pretty new to all this lol =p

Ive tried to play your track but no amtter how many times i press the play button, it just doesnt seem to start to play... :l Soundcloud maybe fuckin' around here, cause i cant seem to paly any single track >_>
I'll check it out ASAP when my internet is to normal again and soundcloud works lol.. Sorry bro D: Ill check it soon :]