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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:42 am
by AL4228
Thanks alot for the input x571, I think it has to do a little with youtube and myself. I'm on vacation right now and i'm mastering through my tokidoki headphones
I'm sure the monitors at home would make all the diff. I'll just do a VIP someday on them and re-master etc
@paravrias - finally worked

little bit of a diff. approach on the synth side

ambience on it is great, overall has a cool vibe. i'd maybe beef the kick up a tad and the snare. Unless you want that really chill vibe to it. dig the tune overall though man, nice production

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:19 am
by suckabeat
Here's a couple, keen to know what you think... =)
Soundcloud
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:52 pm
by quit
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:00 pm
by krispy
Funky / Electro style of tune, check it out and lemme know what you think
http://soundcloud.com/krispy/krispy-swamp-step
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:22 pm
by jstick
Soundcloud
finished! let me know what you think.
Wanted to make something full of anxiety that built up but really melodic too.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:37 pm
by EraREdux
suckabeat wrote:Here's a couple, keen to know what you think... =)
Soundcloud
Excellent track, guy! Could use a little more bassy bass. Other than that, production sounds awesome!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:26 pm
by dj instigate
Cheers for the comments guys appriciate it
BIg up
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:30 am
by HAACK
Not quite finished yet, but would like to get some ideas on this track? This is a remix of Kaiori and Tripwire's tune Beneath The Skin:
Soundcloud

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:55 am
by suckabeat
EraREdux wrote:
Excellent track, guy! Could use a little more bassy bass. Other than that, production sounds awesome!
Thanks man! And yeah, speaking in levels, the low end is a little lacking... But meh haha, already moved onto other projects

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:39 am
by urbannerd62
heres a track i finished a while ago but never got around to posting it here. lemme know what ya think!
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:39 am
by Tain Dubstep
hey guys, id love to give some feedback on your tracks, but since soundcloud is down i cant

Would love it if you checked out my new tune
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gmBKOdub0K0
peace
p.s. i hope you dont think im being ignorant/selfish, i will give some feedback when soundclouds back up!!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:48 am
by Tain Dubstep
ok, soundcloud is back up now ive posted that!
@ urbannerd62 - DUDE, this track is mint! loving the vibes here. Some really good production on the track and youve layered it up well nice, keep up the good work
@HAACK - not much id say needs doing with it really, the production side of things seems good to me and im defiantly feeling the dark vibes. All i can say is just layer it up a bit more with a few little background sounds ect. Nice track overall man!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:53 am
by Craggle
Soundcloud
Gona post some reviews while bored at work

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:03 pm
by Craggle
urbannerd62 wrote:heres a track i finished a while ago but never got around to posting it here. lemme know what ya think!
Soundcloud
This is seriously awesome, love the purple sound you've got going on there, id straight up buy this if it was released ! keep up the good work bro !
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:01 pm
by kaiori breathe
ubannerd62 - seriously nice melodies you have going on in that tune man, props.
craggle - Some nice sounds when it drops, snare has a bit too much white noise or reverb to it for me, not sure which, and I'd like to hear the kick punch through a bit more, but I think that's just down to personal taste. Nice tune over all. Well put together.
HAACK - it sucks, give up producing, bin the tune

- just kidding - it's sexy as fuck and i came.
suckabeat Seriously good ch00n here man, (zombies) great work all round, not a single bad thing to say about it.
jstick - very nice work man, little rough production wise, it sounds a little cluttered at times I think - not sure though, might just be me who thinks that, but otherwise it's a quality tune.
quit strange choice of tune to work on but you made it work very well, quality all round, lovely vibes going on in this tune man. Sounds a little messy to me in the build ups but other than that it's really great, love all the stutters and effects on your bass sound. Really quality work here.
Soundcloud I think this is finished, I'm not really sure. Used a lot of Asian samples in this one. Hopefully people like it.
Hopefully I haven't missed anybody out crit wise.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:00 pm
by hayze99
Kaoiri - Beautiful track. Where did you get the sample from? Can't really give any advice, except maybe that the levels of the synth at the beginning could be a bit higher, but that's just knitpicking.
Craggle - Got the bass down really well; sounding really professional. Really like the stereo imaging in it. I would personally throw in a couple of samples and other weird little bits every couple of bars, just to jazz it up a bit, because it is sounding a tad generic
urbannerd - Are you one of the Urban Nerds? Just sayin, because they're pretty big down in London. Either way, like the track. Would try and sharpen up the synth a little bit, maybe add a tad of compression. I like the little syncopated drop in the beginning - I would integrate more of that into the track.
Haack Not really my style, so I won't comment too much, but the sub is spot on.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:01 pm
by hayze99
Soundcloud
Not dubstep, in the slightest, but regardless, feedback much appreciated.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:45 pm
by kaiori breathe
hayze99 wrote:Kaoiri - Beautiful track. Where did you get the sample from? Can't really give any advice, except maybe that the levels of the synth at the beginning could be a bit higher, but that's just knitpicking.
The string sample that kicks in on the first and last note of the flute is a sarangi sample I found on the interwebz, the flute is a bansuri again found somewhere on the interwebz, and the vocals are from an arabic nasheed. The percussion is mostly from a tabla. I just picked the samples up over time so I can't really remember where I got them but i'm sure if you searched for arabic nasheed, sarangi, tabla or bansuri you'd find something to work with if you wanted them.
Square waves for breakfast sounds awesome by the way, reminds me of old c-64 tunes. Nice bass sound too. That snare is great too. Love all the intertwining parts at the 1.40ish mark. Cool tune.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:10 pm
by mrwoof
would love to have some feedback on my new track snareline please guys...cheers
Soundcloud
@kaiori breathe - v nice chilled work man, really feeling the vocal and tabla (if its a tabla)...not too much wrong with it except maybe change up the percussion a little bit as you progress through the song, will give it another phase
@hayze 99 - like the drum sounds and the sub wobble...pretty cheeky melody...not too sure about the breakdown at 2.38 but can't say i didn't enjoy it all being brought being back in

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010
Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:58 am
by ResetTheAtari
Mmmmm squarewaves for breakfast. Nice!