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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 8:15 pm
by phoenix150
Hi,
I love dubstep, and have always been into some synth, nothing serious till now though.
This is my first production, I was going for a kinda more chill dubstep, with some heavy-ness.
I would love any feedback and any advice on future productions.
Soundcloud http://soundcloud.com/phoenix150/beginnings
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:49 pm
by topmo3
@zonetrooper5 - first of all. the snare is great but at some point it's getting a bit over-used when it comes on every 4. the sounds are real good but it doesn't seem to go anywhere, at least not on the first listen. it almost seems like you could have done better with this but these little things make it a bit annoying to be honest.
@nylle - nice feel to this track. the drum track is really decent. really lovin the fx. mixdown is flawless, everything seems to be in place, sounds really good. fantastic production!
@biscuit - if the drum samples were a bit different, at the start this tune sounds like cyrus. that's a compliment. otherwise i'm not really feeling this one. nice sub though!
here's my new bit!
http://soundcloud.com/skuretracks/gut-n ... you-get-em
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:36 pm
by superginger
#topmo3
really interesting intro! did you sample it yourself?

really feeling the drums and the instruments. hihats are perfect. bass is huge. it's just the melody which honestly sucks... this track got potential but yera... the melody is too simple and dull! I hope it helps!
#zonetrooper
nicely made intro! a bit long for my taste though. cool instruments in the drop! digging the claps... but they are kinda abused at times... chill with them!!! yea the instruments are sick... nice atmos! big up mate
#nylle
this isn't what I usually listen to but, oh my... that introduction choir is extreme... omfg just everything... as it goes in to that drop, it's amazing!!! loving the general progression of the track! what the fuck do you mean with "not as heavy as yalls"? I'm honest when I say this is one of the slickest productions I've heard on this forum... fucking amazing! would kill for a 320! big ups mate happy new year!!!
now over to my finished reimx of Marilyn Manson - Tainted Love. Soundcloud quality is weird... there is a beepy noise in the background but please download the track and listen or just don't mind it haha! feel free to download and to comment!
leave any feedback on soundcloud please!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:04 pm
by topmo3
superginger wrote:#topmo3
really interesting intro! did you sample it yourself?

really feeling the drums and the instruments. hihats are perfect. bass is huge. it's just the melody which honestly sucks... this track got potential but yera... the melody is too simple and dull! I hope it helps!
helped quite a bit, thank you mate. by the melody do you mean the chords that continue throughout the song or the synth lead? but thanks for the honest feedback, appreciate it

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:54 am
by jstick
Niice tracks goin on here. I left a few comments of peoples soundclouds.
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would be wicked to get some feedback on this. I previously made a heavier version of this song and didnt get that much feedback on it, so hopefully this more chilled approach suits it better.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 3:59 pm
by joeroxor
@sprayyypaint, @zonetrooper5 Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I'll be back to have a listen and give my thoughts

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:39 pm
by redjuan
@ Jstick -nice tune,like the progression,vox,bline etc.not huge fan of some of the synth sounds that come in,but that could be just my personal preference. Nice work
@ Topmo- few bits of crit-just in that the sweep noises at the start were a bit nasty and think u cud layer that synth that comes in later in the track. But i really liked the track man,proper kick back vibes,good work
@ superginge,not my thing at all man,but the production is qaulity,drums are top notch. Good work,appreciated it,even tho it isnt my thing.
My track is below,standard deep bit,if anyone wants a 320 of this just comment on the sc & ill send it to ur dropbox straight away, Enjoy.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 1:48 am
by decklyn
redjuan wrote:
My track is below,standard deep bit,if anyone wants a 320 of this just comment on the sc & ill send it to ur dropbox straight away, Enjoy.
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Hey I really like the sound you're developing. Work on the musicality a bit and you'll be rocking.
I would try to push the pad back in the mix on the song you posted - it seems a bit harsh. Try turning it down and using verb for space. Use it more sparsely or something.
One for this month:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:49 am
by Kes-Es
So I accidentally this in the works in progress forum, The bass is Deep not loud.
All feedback will be returned in kind, but I'm worried that this thread will be closing any minute now, so I'll be hitting soundclouds
Enjoy
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:22 pm
by BadBoyBastian3B
Yo made a turbo skanker tune i hope for that ravers. lol
I comment on some tunes after i sleep, i been up 36hours
(left some soundcloud comments)
Eat My Dust
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Scarlet Letter
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P.S. @boo131 like those vocals where they from.

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 10:40 pm
by boo131
Hi peeps.. I'm new here and wanted to get things started so I was wandering if i could get any feedback on my tune.. I'v been producing for around a year now but have only recently started experimenting with dubstep. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 9:15 am
by makemerich
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all feedback appreciated.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 10:25 am
by Kes-Es
MakemeRich, Boo, and badboybastian, check your soundclouds. Good tracks the three of you.
Over to mine, I started this earlier tonight, Kind of as jokes, but I decided to keep it, I quite like where it went, and now I think it's done, Please enjoy and know that most feedback will be eventually returned =).
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:01 pm
by frizzwah
@makemeric: big track, alot of rhythmic interest, i like the atonality of it too.
@BadBoyBastian3B:ye really like this tune, nice sound palette and the vocals work well.
@decklyn: feeling this, alot going on and the mixdown is crisp, really like the chord progression.
& here's mine:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:11 am
by DolphinDiver
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:24 am
by Noonyez
@zonetrooper5 - i like the ambient stuff. keep it up.
@sprayyypaint - the intro was sick. if the kick and snare were changed to something harder then it would be legit.
@legskeattch - sick bassline. the build up was well made. proper.
my first track for 2011. scope and review.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:06 pm
by nnny
@sprayyypaint Yeah I agree with Noonyez, love this, but the kick and snare do seem a little weak.
@legskeattch Man this bassline is fucking awesome, gj
@Noonyez Haha I like this, dead chill man. Only thing is, the hi hats, at the start and throughout seem as if they need a little more reverb tbh.
Heres mine, second ever track, first I wouldn't even show xD
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:32 pm
by Iko Rush
Feedback has been left on soundclouds
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:40 pm
by nnny
Cheers for the follow on Soundcloud Iko, your from Belfast too? Sick
Loving yours, dead chill, I love my chilled tunes

Nice chord progression. Nice when the bass drops, but it seems a tad muddled to me, not sure if its just me tho.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:31 pm
by thinking
will unsticky this by the weekend unless someone beats me to it....please use the Jan 2011 Sticky thread from now on.
