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LiquidBass wrote:Alright, I attempted some house, I'm not sure if it's house xD but It's ok, I know it needs work, please point me in the right direction, It's very short because right now it's just the intro, but I still need some help finding out where to go Soundcloud

Grok wrote:RightOnTime27: Really nice intro! The drop is cool but I think you should keep the riff from the intro actually and maybe change it in the second drop instead. If not at least add something more in the second drop even though the switch up at 1:59 sits very good. Nice percussions but I would like a bigger kick. Heavy sub and I especially like the bass pitch at 1:42. Solid tune!

Captain Carnage: Cool! I like the ruff style but I think you could work some on the drums. Maybe a deeper kick and snare with more punch (keep the snare but layer it with something punchier). Bass and the subtle wobble is really good and sits very nicely with that synth which in itself is cool. I definitely think you should finish it.

Gaol: I like the intro a lot. The pad, piano and sample works good together. I'm not too sure on the drop though. I was expecting something more ambient or melodic with that intro. I'm also not too keen on the main screeching synth sound to be honest and like it better when it's toned down at 1:03 and in the second drop (the small wobble you use at 1:33 sounds really crisp btw, I think you should use that more!). Finally I think the beat is a bit too minimalistic for that kind of drop. Add some more percussions and it will sound better I think. Mix overall sounds good though.

My WIP:

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zen3013 wrote:@ogunslinger - coc-1 Good Vibrations, a good transition from the light elements to hard in the beginning. I would have made ​​a high hat a little louder.

Good mixed thing. Today I tuned more on the soft chill tunes, so I say that I liked the beginning. Sorry for my poor feedback,I know you wanted

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@xistenzbass - your first WIP. Nice drums and percussion. A good combination of midbass and sub, but sub is sometimes not loud enough in my opinion. And yet, tune lenght is 5.50 but I did not see how it came to an end, so that a good structure, and I liked the dark mood.

@Pyrez - s-o-ft-force-wipv3-33. I like this thing, especially at 1.48. Nice Sounding FX, reminded the Knife party. Notes: a strong reverb on the drums, especially snare drum, as well as mid distorted bass, unless you yourself are not wanted. Since I have not set up today on bangers just can not add anything more/

Here is my second song that i show here. I know the lead sometimes is too loud and the tune is bad structured, but it is just a couple of hours today.
P.S. Sorry for my poor English,
Here in Russia we just drink vodka and not enough practicing languages.
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Hero wrote:MY LAST THREE POST WERE MY 3 FEEDBACKS

please guys i need feedbackkkkkk ive been produceing for awhile and want to move into the next plateau but am struggling a bit

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I really need feedback on thes two tracks, neither completely done but both are pretty danm close.....id like to hear your first thoughts and then your opinion....please be very opinionated!
thanks guys