like the progression of the song , and the idea , not to keen on the bell/beep , good idea but the sequence isnt that catchy
the bass is nice on it too , if not a bit loud
@ HOLDA
like the percussion , got a nice rhythm , dont like the vocal , like the synth though keeps the track runnin along nicely
@ DUBAHOLIX
the percussion is nice and so is the piano , but the drums are to much in the background and the piano is a bit to in your face ( but the keys are nice , ignore my shite technical terms lol) , the atmosphere with the little staticbeep is sick :
@ TRIPWIRE22
intro is sick , choir chord goin round n round is a real minfuk , drop's insane proper electro feel to it , just made me look at my track n feel embarrassed, really good work , any chance of a 320 ? or u lookin to release it ??
are you talking about my track magic cuz i can get you a download link
I like it overall, but it sounds like there's something missing. Maybe try adding a little atmosphere to it? I really like that bass line! The first bit would sound better with a little bit of reverb and delay, in my opinion.
marsstu wrote:recently been experiment with some differnt things this is something im playin about with atm
tried to make some dark electro vibe cross with a bit of filth
hakka wrote:EZ all, just been working on this today, still loads of filling out, automation and EQ'ing to do. Just wanted some thoughts on the overall idea.
whooaaaahh, nice! big track mate. Definitely try messing with some automation and sweeps to this to make it even more livelier, keep at it- V. well done
like the progression of the song , and the idea , not to keen on the bell/beep , good idea but the sequence isnt that catchy
the bass is nice on it too , if not a bit loud
@ HOLDA
like the percussion , got a nice rhythm , dont like the vocal , like the synth though keeps the track runnin along nicely
@ DUBAHOLIX
the percussion is nice and so is the piano , but the drums are to much in the background and the piano is a bit to in your face ( but the keys are nice , ignore my shite technical terms lol) , the atmosphere with the little staticbeep is sick :
@ TRIPWIRE22
intro is sick , choir chord goin round n round is a real minfuk , drop's insane proper electro feel to it , just made me look at my track n feel embarrassed, really good work , any chance of a 320 ? or u lookin to release it ??
Cheers for the feedback man i went to listen to your track and it just wouldnt work :S it says soundcloud not available or some crap :/
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 8:52 pm
by GRAYSKALE
@clemsonheadies - both really big tracks - loving the drums and bass lines in them - really stepping tunes - recon that full metal jacket is lacking a little bit of punch though, the style your doing really needs to smack you in the face
@Hakka - this is an awesome sounding tune bro - lovve the vocal samples - cant wait to here this after mixdown and mastering!! Keep up the good work bro!
this is the re-visted version of the tune in my sig - have spent the last two days jazzing it up and trying to get the mix to a decent standard - Soundcloud
will offer more feedback for feedback
Safe
@ Tapphead - Nice one mate, really starting to get a feel for production. On my 3rd tune in 2 weeks lol. Love your tune, proper deep vibes, reminds me of early oldschool garage!
@ Nullbit - Nice one mate, will dish out the 320's when its done
@ GRAYSKALE - Cheers for the feedback on this and the last one. Your tunes are definately sounding big!
Track Updated and taken it to the end, not sure about the last 16 bars before the outro? Soundcloud
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 10:47 pm
by GRAYSKALE
@hakka - this update sounds sweet mate!! Im feeling it a lot - maybe tone down the highs a touch on the bass line - other than that spot - when you pushin' out the 320s??
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 11:08 pm
by hakka
I have done some EQ'ing and toned it down a bit. 320's available now if anyone wants one? Pop a comment on soundcloud and i will PM it to your inbox on there. Cheers again!
heres a new track im currently working on, any feedback and criticisms would be cool. thanks
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 11:58 pm
by modepth
hakka wrote:@ Tapphead - Nice one mate, really starting to get a feel for production. On my 3rd tune in 2 weeks lol. Love your tune, proper deep vibes, reminds me of early oldschool garage! Soundcloud
oi nice one! it was exactly what I was trying to get on to but with a colourful vibe, was listening to Horsepower tons at the time I made that track
edit: oh and just to clear up... Tapphead is my old user name now
, dont like the vocal
, like the synth though keeps the track runnin along nicely
