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nice rhythm and percussion this, got a funky house feel to it!^^^

got a new one from me

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new 140 piece here playasssss

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ninjas tell me what you think

MIK - Duppy & leave (Kalorific Remix)
http://soundcloud.com/kalorific/mik-dup ... ific-remix

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This is me and my roommates attempt at the "purple" sound I suppose

deadcell wrote:new 140 piece here playasssss

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the intro is promising.. nice 'speech' - fits perfectly. the synth is absolutely heavy man! what might be even heavier is, if you'd underlay it with a sub that goes with it.
lloving the crisp sound of the perc!

oh - just got the the point where you underlay the synth with a sub - big one mate!
just one thing: the crash isn't really fitting somehow - but that might be very subjectiv.

productionwise it's clean and very well mixed up!

deadcell wrote:new 140 piece here playasssss

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intro seems a bit too long for me as it isn't really builing up - it's just ''there''.
as a contrary i like the buildup/breakdown at 1:20-1:40
nice clap btw. good choice!

at 2:40 it really gains power! loving this part! you really could shrink the whole first part - minute 2:40 could easely drop sooner i think.

prouctionwise it's clean - nothing to complain about

all in all a nice track with nice sounds - but the arrangement seems a little bit conceptless.
the outro is really chopped up.

imho it needs work on the arrangenemt/structure. also some effects/athmospherics (eg: in the fery end when the beat is out, there is some athmosperic sound: doesn't really fit there somehow)

productionwise, as i said: big up.

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This is me and my roommates attempt at the "purple" sound I suppose

first thing i've heard is the kick that somehow doesn't realy fit into the track - imho it needs a dryer one or with less release (in the end of the kick the kick seems to 'bounce')
your beat would do well with hihats - sounds really raw and unfinished someho.
also synth and sub/bass somehow don't work that well together in some parts.



all in all, i have the feeling that main melody&bass sounds unfinished and a bit... i dunno how to explain... it's like laid just under the beat without concept somehow.
maybe also needs some work on the mixup.

i'm now at minute 4 and i don't really feel it. although you have melodic variation the track just 'burbles'... i think it's mainly because of the beat - try to work on the beat. make a beat of 4 bars that bangs and works together with the bass&melody.
maybe sidechain the melody on the kick or something, to make it as one piece.

well done anyway. not easy to do that purple kinda sound.


and here you go with my last one - inspired by malas set few weeks back somehow. it's a rather heavy one again..:

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thanks for feedback vulva! yeah i know its pretty daft that it takes til over halfway to drop but thats kind of how i wanted it.

Started off as a little experiment after hearing one of those new Skream bits Yunx plays.
But I decided to go a little further with it and created a new tune. I think the mixdown could be better but whatever. Feedback welcome.
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@NilsFG - Feeling that, bass that comes in at 3:12 is tasty. Drums roll nicely.

Bit different to my usual, still working on this one...
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uuh i'm loving your track j-one. really solid.
i want to hear it when it's finished. pm me!!

this one's my next one.. mainly inspiried by james blake...

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Some nice ambient stuff - bit of a change from the dubstep.

vulvavibration wrote: this one's my next one.. mainly inspiried by james blake...

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woah! this is SICK! that bass is absolutley massive! you gonna be throwing any 320's about?

the voices in this are sick aswell - seriously keep this vibe. seriously massive tune.

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Some nice ambient stuff - bit of a change from the dubstep.

this is seriously nice and chilled, really feeling the synth and the clap soaked in reverb sounds really nice

singlepoint wrote:

vulvavibration wrote: this one's my next one.. mainly inspiried by james blake...

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woah! this is SICK! that bass is absolutley massive! you gonna be throwing any 320's about?

the voices in this are sick aswell - seriously keep this vibe. seriously massive tune.

thanks mate - i actually hand out copies of my tracks just to very, very few people tbh. (my philosophy, not to spread my shit as wide as possible)
but please - leave me a pm or something - i will get back to you tonight!

yeah no worries nice one phrex, here's a new one of mine

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@phrex - Tune is massive! Bass sounds sick, love the vocals... all works together really well. Big ups.

@hayze - Fitting name, definitely on a dream world vibe... really laid back, feeling it!

@singlepoint - Liking the atmosphere in this, sub drives it along nicely.. dunno if I was entirely convinced by the percs later on... nice rhythm just wasn't sure of the sound.

Last one I've been working on... not sure if the snares in the intro sound a bit cheap?
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garage influenced thingy i did a while ago. since it would just get dusty on my HD i though i give you ninjas a secret DL link.

http://www.mediafire.com/?9fjocn99a71zlf4

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garage influenced thingy i did a while ago. since it would just get dusty on my HD i though i give you ninjas a secret DL link.

http://www.mediafire.com/?9fjocn99a71zlf4

The sub in this tune fucking KILLS ME. Is that a VST?

j-one wrote:@phrex - Tune is massive! Bass sounds sick, love the vocals... all works together really well. Big ups.

@hayze - Fitting name, definitely on a dream world vibe... really laid back, feeling it!

@singlepoint - Liking the atmosphere in this, sub drives it along nicely.. dunno if I was entirely convinced by the percs later on... nice rhythm just wasn't sure of the sound.

Last one I've been working on... not sure if the snares in the intro sound a bit cheap?
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I like the snare, but maybe take the delay/echo off it? It's something I've noticed in all your tunes (check them on Soundcloud when they pop up as I'm not on here all the time) is that you have a habit of doing that. I mean it's effective every now and again, but don't do it all the time. Just trying to be contructive, I fall into technique/sound traps myself a lot and have to stop myself using the same snare, or going wubwubwubwub.

Cheers for the constructive feedback, always useful... not sure how you mean tho cuz I haven't used delay on my drums in this track (I rarely use delay my drums). I usually have a send with a bit of reverb so they all mesh together... not sure what else it could be?