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NeonOrdnance wrote:

snoopexx wrote:hey guys, just started work on this, my first tune pretty much, feedback wud be much appreciated. not sure about the levels as my speakers are broke..
very early stages still, just thort i'd see wat u lot think?

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cheers!

Pros:
-You absolutely nailed the early dubstep feel
-Drums are superb, and remain interesting throughout the whole track
-Great spaced-out vibes
-Loving the jungle-y bass

Cons:
-Needs some more variation

I know it's a WIP but you've only got a short intro and the first drop, and the track doesn't really develop much. Just keep doing what you've been doing and you'll have a superb final product in no time!

NeonOrdnance wrote:

zonetrooper5 wrote:Heres a track I'm working on atm, feedback would be appreciated.

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Pros:
-Well mixed
-Good snares
-Bass is definitely unique
-Filthy!

Cons:
-Needs more build-up on the drop-- it kind of just drops in, there's not a lot of warning. This is especially a problem for the double-time drop near the end. If you're going to get away with doing something this atonal there's got to be more build.

Not really my thing-- I like stuff a little more melodic-- but there's definitely an audience for this and it's a pretty well-produced track on the technical front. You just need to sort out the structure so there aren't so many jarring transitions. If you need inspiration, try putting the intro beeps in again after the first pause, then go to the second part of the drop after that-- that would be a good starting point. You shouldn't feel like you have to stick to a certain structure but intro-drop-intro-build-drop makes the song a lot easier to skank to.

DannyH93 wrote:apastrat i like what you done at 30 secs, the drop sounds pretty good man like hip hopstep haha

heres mine, any feedback appreciated anyone

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narrator wrote:Hey guys, started working on a bass sound today after a week of listening to Bar9 and Noisia, i just quickly put together a bit of a loop so nothing is final yet.

i would really love some feedback on this sound as i feel it's one of my strongest yet.. cheers

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Geeza wrote:

DannyH93 wrote:apastrat i like what you done at 30 secs, the drop sounds pretty good man like hip hopstep haha

heres mine, any feedback appreciated anyone

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Nice track only thing id say is move thme hhats from the drop onwards they dont sound right maybe its just me though. like the track its propa dark an that breathing sample is class!!!

DannyH93 wrote:

Geeza wrote:

DannyH93 wrote:apastrat i like what you done at 30 secs, the drop sounds pretty good man like hip hopstep haha

heres mine, any feedback appreciated anyone

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Nice track only thing id say is move thme hhats from the drop onwards they dont sound right maybe its just me though. like the track its propa dark an that breathing sample is class!!!

thanks man i do kinda see what you mean about the hats. one question do you think the subbass is good enough? or can you hear it at all?

and btw narrator mate that bass is fucking nice

Geeza wrote:
Jesus christ im not gunna put a shitty youtube style dubstep metaphore here, but that is disgusting my friend!!!

DannyH93 wrote: and btw narrator mate that bass is fucking nice

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narrator wrote:Hey guys, started working on a bass sound today after a week of listening to Bar9 and Noisia, i just quickly put together a bit of a loop so nothing is final yet.

i would really love some feedback on this sound as i feel it's one of my strongest yet.. cheers

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DannyH93 wrote:Soundcloud

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This is stupid mad catchy. The kind of track you could get stuck in your head all day.

CBK81 wrote:
The track could use a little direction, but I really like the sound of your bass.