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Feedback / constructive criticism wanted...
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:27 pm
by dj n/a
Yo, just uploaded a new tune into my soundcloud player.
Just started writing really, and would like a few opinions / constructive criticism on the material.
It's a bit of a work in progress but... here's the link
http://soundcloud.com/ferryman
Cheers.
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:22 am
by oli90
Liked it up until the bass kicked in. The bass kinda masks the rest of the tune which is a shame cause there are some interesting ideas in there.
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:26 am
by dj n/a
oli90 wrote:Liked it up until the bass kicked in. The bass kinda masks the rest of the tune which is a shame cause there are some interesting ideas in there.
Yeah - I'm a bit dubious about the bass... I have the issue of having to mix my tracks through a pair of shoddy (and I mean SHODDY!) old speakers - so I think that's got a lot to do with it.
I'm currently on the hunt for some decent studio monitors, so I'm guessing I'll hear the track in a whole new light once I get them up and running.
Thanks for the feedback though!
More welcome people
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:18 pm
by tripaddict
yeah change the bass and up the octave
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:41 pm
by psychological
the beat's pretty solid. good idea for the bass line too, i agree with the comment about trying to put it up an octave. good job man!
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:18 am
by back to bassics
All noted. Thanks for the feedback guys
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:44 pm
by dj n/a
bump.
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:22 pm
by dj n/a
any more takers?