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just a new beat, pm for 320's if you want this version, looking for some constructive critisicm

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nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick
just my opion thou, get some others!

All solid material, but the sections are a bit long. Maybe cut each bit down, use it as part of a track?

fuzz_2k wrote:nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick
just my opion thou, get some others!

cheers man, will see what i can do about that noise, by a "move around" what do you mean?
cheers for checkin!

Province wrote:by a "move around" what do you mean?

same as what crane said, shorten some of the sections, and switch them up a bit
drums sound tight btw!

cheers guys! will get on the re edit flex.

bump, any more comments?

id love to hear it once yourve re worked it

try taking a little top end out from the initial buzz sort of lead, imo though... and yes the drum groove is really nice..