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Brand New Tunes Needing Feedback !
Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 5:56 pm
by vonboyage
Hey Guys..
Ive Got 4 New Tracks On The Myspace Ready For Constructive Critisism !
Ive Read Previous Posts Where PPL Have Left Very Good Feedback, So Im Hopin This Time Isnt Any Different.
All Feedback Is Appreciated
Cheers !
www.MYSPACE.com/VONBOYAGE
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:11 pm
by dj-unitz
The Face Is very verY veRY VERY BIG.
Thuping My House Down haha.
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:07 pm
by skunk
malibu is tiiiight!! keep on producin man, this shit's hot like fiiiyaaaahh!!!
Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:51 pm
by drift
easy man
all tracks are good backbones for me but are lacking incidental sounds / edits ( just my opinion V )
nothing heavy or full on, just the odd ( even if it only happens once in the track ) back ground hit with a bit of delay and fx or random noises that work with the percussion, like burial and others do with there beats, just to give your tracks a few more layers mate
adjusting the velocity on some of your bass ( malibu ) / drum hits, will help create a stronger groove too......solid beats though man, keep em' coming
drift
Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:47 pm
by vonboyage
Thanks for the comments, exactly what i needed to hear.
Drift, i know what ur saying, Malibu, 42 Car.. & Swine are infact skeletons at this moment in time.
They will get a massive overhaul before they get exported again.
If your into those kinda.. fx sorta tracks.. ill be glad to sort u out sum 320's .. ive got quite a few of 'em type of tunes.. Loefah inspires me haha.
Anyway, Thanks all. I'll be posting newer bits in the next week or so, so i'll keep yall informed..
Unitz bruv, The Face absolutely tears down my house too hahaha.
We Lova Dubbit Yaaa !!
Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 9:45 pm
by two oh one
I like the Face a lot. It has a lot of potential. - Can't wait to hear the finished version. I like the big buildup. I love the breakdown and would love to hear this kicking back in with massive bass. It seems to lose its way after it kicks in. Needs direction. Get it finished and PM me to let me know when it is. It could be a massive track.
Malibu is something I'd like to hear on vinyl. Could do with some air and space, but get it finished, then work on the mix.
42 Car Pileup is alright, didn't make me prick up my ears.
Swine - Can't get it to play. Bloody Myspace.
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 2:38 am
by dj-unitz
haha yer on myspace the bass sounds shitty cause its proberly low bit rate but on mp3 u can hear it perfectly.
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 4:24 am
by blk plague
your chest!