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Hey i'm new here and well this is pretty much my first attempt at a tune, its not extremely dubby, but I think its got a nice bit of bass to it. I've been messing about on ableton on and off for a good while now, but this is the first time I applied myself a little bit and tried to make something approaching an actual song. So any thoughts? or constructive criticism for me to take on board for my next attempt, or what i should do to make this one better.

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