Share and comment on your works-in-progress here-- please don't post until you've offered feedback on at least THREE tracks already. The DSF heads will keep it self-policed. now get to writin!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:12 pm
by slyman
an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part Soundcloud
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:18 pm
by gnome
Yes Slyman keep it up
Pros:
+sweet drum sounds
+haunting lead sound
+nice deep warm sounds throughout
Cons
- sometimes it seems the bass hits too high and creats an unwanted wobble noise...if you know what I mean lol?
Apart from that keep it up
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:12 pm
by slyman
thanks for the feedback man. and yea i kno what u mean about that sound, i kind of like it tho and i dont kno if u could get rid of it anyways. it might sound different to u tho cuz im doing this on shitty earphones and computer speakers lol
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:23 pm
by hexade
Nice tune slyman, im not too sure what to say about it lol, but i like the vibes. And nice track in your sig gnome
Lighter than my other tracks. Just started working on it. Not sure where to take it though. Help and feedback would be greatly appreciated
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:53 pm
by Drekbek
hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:58 pm
by hexade
Drekbek wrote:hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet
Pretty nice calm track you have there do you mind if you give me a bit of feedback on my track? im not sure if i should stay away from that kind or if it is actually any good, my mate likes it, but i do need more feedback.
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:08 pm
by Drekbek
Listened to it and its nice, hehe when im producing i always end up getting stuck and thinking fuck i need like 2 more minutes to fill up
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:10 pm
by hexade
yeah same lol, and i generally dont have enough to spend on my tunes, and dont even know how to tackle mastering lol, but im gradually getting more developed
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:15 pm
by phrex
slyman wrote:an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part Soundcloud
soiunds cool... just for my taste a little bit too saucy if you know what i mean... but i might be wrong, tho i'm listening over my monitors...
drum pattern is indeed interesting . love this 8bit feeling of it.
Soundcloud
woul,d love to hear some quick opinion/advice.. want to finish that today
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:30 pm
by phrex
c'mon guys... i don't wanna be a pain in the ass... but i got an hour left here in the studio, then i gotta work
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:57 pm
by back2onett
vulvavibration wrote:c'mon guys... i don't wanna be a pain in the ass... but i got an hour left here in the studio, then i gotta work
not sure if I'm too late to help
I like the feel of this man, good vibes. that woodblock or whatever it is is overly prominent maybe cut off some of the highs on that and make that kick stand out more can't hear it over the bass, but yeah I'd love to hear it finished
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 9:02 pm
by back2onett
doubles
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 9:26 pm
by ironik
hexade wrote:Nice tune slyman, im not too sure what to say about it lol, but i like the vibes. And nice track in your sig gnome
Lighter than my other tracks. Just started working on it. Not sure where to take it though. Help and feedback would be greatly appreciated
loving it man! got some proper flow on it sounds mint as.
definitely your own style as far as im concerned.
big ups from New Zealand bro!
Thanks so much for the feedback! Really does give me motivation to carry on. I thought i'd share another track, quite opposite to 'Dreams', this one is a lot darker and filthyer, at the moment im just finding my feet, i barely know my way around FL studio. Soundcloud
Enjoy it, feedback will be much appreciated, and thanks again for the people that did take the time to listen & Comment!
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 10:45 pm
by phrex
back2onett wrote:
vulvavibration wrote:c'mon guys... i don't wanna be a pain in the ass... but i got an hour left here in the studio, then i gotta work
not sure if I'm too late to help
I like the feel of this man, good vibes. that woodblock or whatever it is is overly prominent maybe cut off some of the highs on that and make that kick stand out more can't hear it over the bass, but yeah I'd love to hear it finished
cheers mate... finished it i guess... will send you pm as soon as soundcloud doesn't fuck around
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:12 pm
by penndragon
slyman wrote:an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part Soundcloud
This track is kinda different but i like it....this track would fit really well on a mario bros game....
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:18 pm
by penndragon
Drekbek wrote:hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet
im feeling this track Drekbek....but could u raise the level of the beats as i think there to low in the mix
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:26 pm
by honey-d
Drekbek wrote:hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet
This track is really mellow and cool, I like it alot but I do agree that the mixdown isn't quite even. The drums seem too quiet along with the bass and the more ambient sounds are sort of filling up all the sound; maybe just artistic decision though? I hope to see you finish this one up though
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:38 pm
by Mike-Joyce
slyman wrote:an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part Soundcloud
Liken the sound of your beat. I could be a bit louder/thicker. But the actual sound of the hits are good. This track would be really good with some vocals. Maybe vocals with some delay would sound good. Also a bit more structure would help too.
