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i'm kinda new to producing... heres a short bit of a song i started today. far from finished, but as i have no local mentors, i'm willing to be criticized by you lovely folks. be as nitpicky or as generic as you'd like.
obviously the structure will be quite different, a few more parts and more switch ups, but as for the sounds that are there, what do you think?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/745wsh

gear used:
ableton live 6
mackie 1604
sonic charge microtonic
vangaurd
monitored on yorkville YSM1p

thanks

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ypkzvh
or maybe that link...?

trying to dl now. sendspace is givin me agg though. i'll let you know when i get it. i've got a track on me myspace profile i've been working on. let me know what you think bro.

love your track man, productions real crisp, original sound.the track flows and evolves nicely.. nice stuff... mind sharing what software you're on?

yeah, nice first effort bro. keep building. what's that sample from anyway?

glad you like the track. i'm just using reason on my powerbook right now. still learning all the ins and outs. really want to buckle down and learn live as well.

the samples from "children of men". that line was just asking to be sampled