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FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:28 pm
by Sharmaji
show it off, baby!!!! newbs: post your tracks HERE. not in the main section, or else it's Lockville, population: you. You also risk alpaca ostracization and it's been known to get ugly.
please give 3 comments before you post material, as well-- community is a big thing.
bless
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:45 pm
by wirez
Ooooo 1st
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This one is the next track from my forth coming EP: 'Short Circuit EP'
Enjoy

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:45 pm
by wabble
Edit:
Wabble Dubstep - 10min Mix vol.2 GRIME
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Original works in progress sampler of dubstep grime tracks.. MCs start'a spittin"
Edit:
Wabble Dubstep - 30min Mix vol.1 FILTH (ft. 16bit, Datsik, Bassnectar, The Widdler, Excision, Wabble, Borgore)
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Live Dubstep set (Sharkeez in Santa Barbara 5/4/10)
Wabble Dubstep - 30min Mix vol.2 BASS (ft. Unkle Sam, Bassnectar, Doctor P, Excision, DZ, Datsik, Ed Solo, Fine Cut Bodies, Flux Pavilion, Reso)
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Live Dubstep set (Sharkeez in Santa Barbara 5/4/10)
^^Let me kno how u like the SUBSONIKxGAMMA RAY mashup!!
Wabble Dubstep - Slippery (Orig. Mix)
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Wabble Dubstep - Gutta Strutta (Orig. Mix)
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Wabble Dubstep - 10min Mix vol.1 SUNDAY
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first attempt at a mix..
Feedback and timed constructive criticism encouraged, thanks
-Wabble
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:14 pm
by mistayif
@ wirez: very nicely chopped up breaks and really feeling the pads your using but i'm not really a fan of those vocals. very tight mix tho
@ wabbles: i like the overall groove to slippery but i feel that the bubbly synth is just a little bit too loud. also the lfo u have on that subbass makes it sound like theres an lfo on the whole track. dunno if thats just the effect you were going for or the bass needs eqing so it doesn't cause everything to clip when it comes in. really like the drum pattern and that snare
can't really comment on gutta strutta because its not really my cup of tea but the mixdown sounds a little off on my speakers. again, i think your midrange synth is too loud and also there is very little bass. just my comments though, hope you find them useful

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:17 pm
by mistayif
haven't really been on the productions lately because of uni work and lack of inspiration but i just knocked up this little chilled one.
not really dubstep but its bass heavy and at 110 bpm, see what you make of it
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feedback would be very much appreciated, especially regarding my mixdowns as i've only given it a quick one to make sure eq's aren't clashing
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:20 pm
by wobbinhood
Heres 2 tracks that i made that completely suck
give me pointers!
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http://soundcloud.com/wobbinhood/duh-duh-duh">question mark</a> by <a href="
http://soundcloud.com/wobbinhood">wobbinHOOD</a></span>
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http://soundcloud.com/wobbinhood/sketchy-edit">sketchy edit waah waah</a> by <a href="
http://soundcloud.com/wobbinhood">wobbinHOOD</a></span>
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:47 pm
by wirez
Hello mate, use the Soundcloud button when posting and place simply, the Soundcloud URL into the parameters! Hope this helps

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:53 pm
by Dub_Fiend
wirez wrote:Ooooo 1st
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This one is the next track from my forth coming EP: 'Short Circuit EP'
Enjoy

Safe man, pretty tasty tuna as I said before

kinda quiet vox, but otherwise it's full of ravey, beefy goodness
Dub Fiend
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 12:31 am
by kaiori breathe
wirez wrote:Ooooo 1st
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This one is the next track from my forth coming EP: 'Short Circuit EP'
Enjoy

I fucking love big thick pads in an intro. Nice pads, nice vox, very nice melodies and harmonic content. Great sounds on that lead synth and great bass sounds. Completely flawless imo. One of the best tracks I've seen in the feedback forum for a long time. Nice breaks too.
@mistayif: I didn't expect to hear two amazing tracks in a row like that. First wirez then yours. Great stuff, both of you. Love your groves and the what you've done with that vocal sample throughout.I'm listening through headphones atm and your lovely sub lines are making my brain wobble. Not a single point in this track is without it's own merits. I love those little rising synths after the 3 minute mark. Lovely backwards cymbal too (if that's what it is). There's a great couple of bars at 3.26 or so where something weird happens in the drums rhythmically too. Absolutely great.
As for the second track up. I was going to say "it's almost as good as the first" then it hit the 1 minute mark and I've decided to instead say "definitely as good as the first."
You've got two really quality tracks there.
EDIT: This isn't dub-step so I'm not sure if I'm breaking the rules by posting this in here. But I did some video game music the other day for a friend and I'd love to get your opinions on it. I arranged all the tracks into one big medley. It's all in 8-bit style.
I left comments at the start of each of the themes.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 3:09 am
by djwom
Here's a remix of one of my old tracks!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:28 am
by pess86
hey a new track i started a while back but finished when i got out of rehab recently..
good lookin on any comments or suggestions.
feedback coming soon
thanks
P -
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PESSONE - THIS IS LOS ANGELES
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:49 am
by pess86
THIS ONES NEW TOO..ITS SHORT BUT FUNKY.
PROBABLY NEED TO MAKE IT LONGER. WHAT DO YOU THINK ?
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THANKS
P -
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 6:25 am
by mechs
@pess86 - I like the melody mate, I think the drums need a bit more punch though
@kaiori - sounds great man, should do a massive dubstep remix of it.
My new one.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 7:48 am
by jfloyd
Finally found some time to finish something...
enjoy
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 8:21 am
by eusebio
finished songs mix
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big ups!!!!!!!!

GALAXI
I hope it works. if not please visit URL
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:33 pm
by jaydot
@pess: Nice track mate, feeling everything about that Xanax Dreams, nice and chilled, well done
@mechs: Again another nice chilled track.
Here's my chilled remix of N trance's Set u Free.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:50 pm
by bugsky
@wirez: Liking the amen, but feels a bit too "dry" for my liking - could do with some more processing. Pads are wicked. Bass is good.
@wabble: Slippery; sounds like it's name xD - I fee like I could swim in that wet wobbly bass. Maybe too much high shiney reverb on the tunes. Could do with something else to fill up the low end above the sub. Interesting track.
Gutta Strutta; Another interesting track. Need to work on the levels tho - the bass stands out a bit too much from the percussive elements. Then again, I'm not a huge fan of those sounds used.
@mistayif: Great track. Reminds me of Future Sound of London. Good usage of the percussive elements - really drives the vibe along. Love this kind of stuff. Could do with a better outro tho, cos it ends a bit abruptly.
In regards to the mixdown - the vocal like synth could be brought up a bit. There's a very quiet ride that could be made louder to add a bit more shine. Overall tho, I really like this track and I wouldn't worry too much a bit it.
@mechs: Some really lovely elements in this track. The trancey synth keeps things plodding along nicely - although it could be a bit quieter, to let the other layers come through. The vocal samples are a great touch.
Here's my latest 'finished' track:
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Lookin forward to your views.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:46 pm
by soupdogg
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 6:00 pm
by mistayif
bugsky wrote:
@mistayif: Great track. Reminds me of Future Sound of London. Good usage of the percussive elements - really drives the vibe along. Love this kind of stuff. Could do with a better outro tho, cos it ends a bit abruptly.
In regards to the mixdown - the vocal like synth could be brought up a bit. There's a very quiet ride that could be made louder to add a bit more shine. Overall tho, I really like this track and I wouldn't worry too much a bit it.
nice on man, good to hear my mixdown is sounding decent. yea, as the name suggests i just did this track as a little interlude/break away from dubstep so didn't really want to develop it into a proper track. cheers for checking and the feedback tho
really liking the pads and the layered vocals on u're track, i think the bass could be a little heavier on the drop to give it more impact. the breakdown is lush aswell
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:36 pm
by Layzie18
Collab with me and fome
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feedback appreciated
thanks