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first. song. ever.
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:14 am
by guttamouf
this is just a rough draft of pretty much the first song i've ever completed. just looking for a little feedback here.
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Re: first. song. ever.
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:24 am
by EBR
Hmm feedback i'd say come up with a reggae/ roots kinda guitar riff to bring in and then add some sirens here and there. :smoke: Look up my man Werd2Jah and get him to spit some lyrics over that ambient break and you've got a winner.
*cough*cough*cough*hack*
Yeeeaahhhh man... def add some sirens.
