Feedback on my tunes

[dead_ed]

Hey, Im new to making stuff on reason 4 and just wondered if you could give me some constructive feedback on what is right and wrong in 2 of my songs

soundcloud.com/dead-ed-1

cheers for whoever does it will be a great help!

[Widowmaker]

http://www.dubstepforum.com/works-in-pr ... 58910.html

post there not on the main forum, thanks