A little help?
Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:30 am
I'm pretty new here, so I hope I'm putting this in the right place.
I'd like some help. I know my shit isn't very good, but I just don't know what I need to make it better. Could someone tell me what I'm missing, or need to change? I feel like I've got a pretty good start. A friend of mine said that it needs "transfers", but I don't know what he means and he couldn't explain. lol.
Feedback would be awesome. Thanks so much!!!
http://soundcloud.com/cadejoblanco/im-a-computer
I'd like some help. I know my shit isn't very good, but I just don't know what I need to make it better. Could someone tell me what I'm missing, or need to change? I feel like I've got a pretty good start. A friend of mine said that it needs "transfers", but I don't know what he means and he couldn't explain. lol.
Feedback would be awesome. Thanks so much!!!
http://soundcloud.com/cadejoblanco/im-a-computer