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over the rainbow by hypnos feed back would be appreciated

Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 5:01 am
by hypnos1
Soundcloud
what do yall think?

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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 5:40 pm
by hypnos1
Critique plox

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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:31 pm
by hypnos1
Soundcloud
remastered

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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:33 pm
by TeoTransform
Boring

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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 10:17 am
by hypnos1
wow... helpful

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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:07 am
by egoless
hypnos1 wrote:Soundcloud
what do yall think?
very thin drums, too loud wobbless, too quiet sub bass...

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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 5:16 pm
by DigitsUK
personally i like the drum feel, but you've gone completley counter to the emotion and mood of the song wit the wobble and tried blowing my face off but just ruined everything~! i think that this track split in two, putting the wobble (with a more variation) to a phat hard hitting snare drum beat would sound sick cus that wobble is fucking fierce!!! and keeping over the rainbow and the drums with a more mellow vibe and wobbles to show to the mood would sound better.

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Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:59 am
by hypnos1
@egoless and digitsUK thank you much more helpful. i agree that there is something not quite right about this track and i aim to resolve it. hopefully your input will aid me in that.
also every other comment on the sub was that it was too phat. personally i think i need to hear it thru a club set up to know for sure

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Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 6:30 am
by MrTommyJay
sick track man. I feel theres a drastic change between the beginning and the drop. Easily solved by taking out the beat for 4 beats and adding a sound that foreshadows a drop such as a sweeping pad or something. The beats lacking a little umph as well, but that wobble synth is SIIICK!!! its so nasty!! if you can find a way to properly pull this all together, its def a 5 star track in my book!

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Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 12:34 am
by hypnos1
@mrtommyjay i definitely need a warning before the drop. the beat iunno about. ill hafta look and see what i used since everybody seems to think the drums are lacking. thnx for the input

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Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:17 am
by DigitsUK
another quick n easy way to prep for a drop, just a long crash cymbal reversed, works a beaut, and if you want it to play back out just add the origional linked up. sounds pretty cool i think dependent when needed and what not.

p.s any chance you can check out my song, freshly made today, interested in your thoughts on it D: (its my sig)

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Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:30 am
by hypnos1
DigitsUK wrote:p.s any chance you can check out my song, freshly made today, interested in your thoughts on it D: (its my sig)
i had already opened it in a new window when i read that lol

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Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:36 am
by DigitsUK
haha nice one ^^