mindcontrol wrote:a lot of people have commented that I need to learn song structure, how have you guys gone about it?
16/32 bar intro
64 bar main body 1
16 bar breakdown
49 bar main body 2
16 bar outro
2-16-4-32-2-32-4-16-4-64-16
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49 seems a bit odd, where does that come from? Usually people work with multiples of 4 or 8. Sometimes weird things like that suit the song though.
The rest seems OK, I'd extend your breakdown a bit, seems a bit short by comparison to your two main sections. I'd double it up personally.
Here's a really standard template I turn to a lot. Bear in mind I like symmetry so this is kind of influenced by that:
32 bar intro * 64 drop 32 breakdown * 64 drop 32 outro.
* optional 1/2, 1 or 2 bars of nothing to sort of build tension before you drop - only if it fits minds you, never do it just to have it there.
If you wanna make it more interesting
32 bar intro consisting of :16 bar intro, 16 bar intro with variation,
*
64 bar drop consisting of : 24 bar drop, 8 bar reduced drop (simpler percussion maybe take out pads an really let the bass/melody lines breathe) - my themes in drops are usually very simple 8 bar themes that get repeated, so here what you're seeing is 3 recurrences of the same theme then one that gets reduced to emphasis the theme - repeat 24 bar drop with variation, repeat 8 bar reduced drop with variation
32 bar breakdown consisting of : 16 bar breakdown, then the same 16 bars but with a feel of a build up, so maybe put in some filtered hi-hats with a white noise sweep on the last 8 bars (that's just an example of one way to build it up)
*
64 bar drop repeated
32 bar outro
*Again optional 1/2, 1, or 2 bars of empty space to build tension.
You've really got to find a structure or a few structures that suit you and suit the song you're writing, that structure won't fit everything I write, often I reduce sections or increase sections of instead of a breakdown I'll have a new theme or something. So always keep the song in mind and don't be too rigorous.
Best thing to do is to listen to the artists you want to write like and see what they're doing then put your own little twists on it and your own personality into it.
Your own personality will play an integral role in your structuring of your tracks. For instance like I said I love symmetry I can't stand something not being symmetrical so on my second drop it has to look the same as my first so no variation for me, and they have to be the same length or it makes me die inside, which some would consider a weakness, but that's a part of how I write and it has influenced the way I structure my tracks I need to make things interesting enough to repeat a second time without variation. So if you can create a structure that avoids pitfalls like that you'll be doing well. Equally numbers like 49 make me die inside

I have to work according to 8s, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128, 256, I can get away with those 1 or 2 bar breaks without getting too anal about it every now and then but I'd never do it every song or it would give me an ulcer from the stress of looking at it, lol.
So I guess what I'm saying is people's structures are based really heavily on who they are as people and what suits them best. So listen to artists you want to be like, listen to whats happening, write it down if it helps, then try and emulate it, and add your own twists to it, and eventually you'll just slip into a few set structures that really suit you and your writing style, of course when you get to that stage you'll need to make sure you don't get stuck in a rut writing the same song over and over again, but you can worry about that when the time comes
Hope that helps to some degree.