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[FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:06 am
by stimulation
Here's new tune.... Let me know what you think?

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Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:01 am
by subfreq
Okay I will be straight up ... you have a long way before you post on forums. Don't stop producing ... keep it up. EZ.

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:16 pm
by stimulation
In reference to dubstep I guess your right... Been producing other genres for years... I can't compare to any of your work so let me know what is exactly missing from the track so i can get better... Pe@ce...

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:48 pm
by Borderline
this is quite funky,
im feelin it . Gj
I would of made the instrument in the intro a little bit less static .. otherwise its pretty groovy =)

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:02 pm
by stimulation
Thanks for the feedback!!!!

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:43 pm
by mimosa
I think you need to eq better and have more separation among the sounds. Good stuff. Check me out ....
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=185024

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:23 pm
by stimulation
Thanks for the advice!!!!!

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:05 pm
by paravrais
stimulation wrote:In reference to dubstep I guess your right... Been producing other genres for years... I can't compare to any of your work so let me know what is exactly missing from the track so i can get better... Pe@ce...
I'd say in terms of production overall. Just cos you've been doing something a long time doesn't mean your necessarily good at it. Don't wanna come accross as too harsh but I always have to be honest with my feedback. I felt like your mixdown was *really* poor. Levels and EQ were all over the place, drums had no punch and lacked groove, synthesis on the bassline (and most things) was boring and muddy. Melodies weren't up to scratch either. I'd say do some research into how to make a more polished mixdown, synthesis and also look into some musical theory. I find scales like harmonic minors, lydian, natural minor etc are good for dubstep :)

Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 1:02 am
by stimulation
paravrais wrote:I'd say in terms of production overall. Just cos you've been doing something a long time doesn't mean your necessarily good at it. Don't wanna come accross as too harsh but I always have to be honest with my feedback. I felt like your mixdown was *really* poor. Levels and EQ were all over the place, drums had no punch and lacked groove, synthesis on the bassline (and most things) was boring and muddy. Melodies weren't up to scratch either. I'd say do some research into how to make a more polished mixdown, synthesis and also look into some musical theory. I find scales like harmonic minors, lydian, natural minor etc are good for dubstep :)
First off there's nothing worse than a personal opinon clouding a simple response. Frankly, You are entitled to feel & say what ever you wish. Keep it simple & focus on the track please. Thanks for the feedback btw... I didn't ask about what you felt about me as a producer at all. I'm asking for feedback on the track & that's it. Thanks for taking your time to listen to my track.....