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[feedback] Arapaima - We need to talk (WIP) [idk really]
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 1:31 am
by Unabomber
Soundcloud
so yeah... we had a fight.
possibly forthcoming.
Re: [feedback] Arapaima - We need to talk (WIP) [idk really]
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:23 am
by Unabomber
please bros
inb4 u need to feedback other people.
just one honest feedback and i`ll do it. i`m more of a lurker. having started my own label this year, i actually signed some artists i found on DSF.
Re: [feedback] Arapaima - We need to talk (WIP) [idk really]
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:03 pm
by darigan
Your tune it has potential but ya need to change it up, I mean its just the same 1 or 2 bar drum loop for the whole track with no variation, it just gets boring.
You should try make your beats in 8 or 16 bar loops. That can be made up of your main 1 or 2 bar loop, that variates every 4 or 8 bars turning it in an 8 bar loop, then use the lowpass filter like ya do on the track at the end of every 16, or whatever, maybe add a few ambient hits, just something to change it up.
Re: [feedback] Arapaima - We need to talk (WIP) [idk really]
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:13 pm
by Unabomber
thanx my brother
all that u said is perfectly true, and i was gonna do just that. the mixing is not spot on either, i know, and i also know exactly what i`m gonna do with it. this is a wip i made when she left me. i made it on my headphones.
Thank you man, i really really appreciate it!