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http://soundcloud.com/gorgonpuke/magic

Any helpful comments will be muchly appreciated thanks

melodically this is good and really interesting, I like the vocal, but the percussion is a bit predictable, work on the percussion lines and make them more intricate and complex, also think about maybe trying to get the best snare sound possible, atm it seems lacking and I think could be made tighter and given more of a punch - EQ, compression etc.

piano sounds really good aswell, nice rich warm tonez

Wow thank you for your comments muchly appreciated! I will spend more time trying to get that snare nice and punchy and work on the vocals more. thanks again

not what i was expecting but i defietly dig it man!
id say work on teh drums a little bit, make those drums FATTER haha

I echo the views about the drums, they are way too woolly at the moment (the kick becomes all but mute during the main section!). Melodically it's very nice, but the reverb tails sound a bit short on the pianos and drum rolls, and overall everything feels a bit too centred in the mix.

You would definitely benefit hugely from some lessons in EQ, as your songwriting technique is great.

I'm totally with you man, I wanted to post it as a hlaf finished canvas too see what it needed as I'm still very new too computer music only been doing it for 3 months. But thank you so much for the comments from EVERYONE =] They are all taken on board and thanks for the links man i'll have a bloody good read lol

check this out
http://www.dnbscene.com/article/88-thin ... q-tutorial

who's the bitch now! sound's good! :D:D