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Rekorder - Creation

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 2:42 pm
by rekordah
www.virb.com/rekorder

been listening to alot of the skull disco stuff and this is kinda on that sorta vibe. unfinshed but i thought i'd get sum opinons.

Constructive Criticism Welcome, Wastemen will be ignored!

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 7:54 am
by chubbs
Got sum potential. Maybe bring that big lead sound down. Drop it out sometmies & step the beat up. A bit of variation on the bass, and ... well.. everything else. Keep going!

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:23 am
by oyaarss
oi, oi!

you really got some unique vibes, rekorder! this piece is definitely a good start!

as to criticism, i've got only 2 things to say:

1. i would try to make the (room)size of the snare reverb and probably, a bit more decay too.

2. by putting more diversity into drumpart you can go on and on with the same melody/bass part and you would keep listener's attention. the piece is great, tho i feel like it lacks a bit of diversity

anyway - good luck, i'd love to look at the final stage of this track for sure!

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:13 am
by rekordah
thanx for the advise people!

will keep on graftin!

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:59 pm
by rekordah
Bumple!