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Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:59 pm
by ora_blu
hey hey,

i am working on this tune for quite some time now...
think I have a problem with just leaving stuff ...

anyways, any thoughts on the mix or arrangement would be much appreciated.

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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:55 am
by faultier
the mixdown is alright in my opinion (but i'm listening on not so good headphones), i really like the synth work and the groove you have going on

but i feel the track is a bit too repetitive and doesnt seem to go anywhere, note i'm not a big fan of minimal so that could be just me

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:49 pm
by rhek
Pads need to be thicker. Vox sticks out too much because there aren't enough elements to glue it in. Low end is nice, got a good groove. Nice edits.

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:08 pm
by ora_blu
thank you guys

kind of have the same feeling about the pad...
somethings missin in the mid range.
maybe i'll get back on it later...

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:51 pm
by bigfootspartan
That's a killer percussion you have going on, it's complex and groovy without being overly annoying or pretentious. I was thinking maybe some stabs with some delay and reverb could accent some parts, but then again that could ruin the atmosphere you've got going on. The mixdown sounds pretty solid!

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:29 pm
by djrobyn
love it!

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 1:59 pm
by ora_blu
thanks!

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 6:13 pm
by ora_blu
bump

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:38 pm
by Biggls
intro started to get a bit boring but i can see why you made it that length. Nice grooves. Might be able to bit a little more lo end to the kick. just a tad. other than that it's sounding sick bro :)

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:07 pm
by ora_blu
thanks!

Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:44 pm
by ora_blu
bump :P