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pretty sick man, only thing is i feeel it cudda used more of a drop

all you have is a kick, snare, wobble and samples.. maybe bass. honestly you need a LOT more fillers, things to keep the song interesting. dubstep loses it's musicality if the percussive side to it is also lost (as well as an audible melody which is often disregarded). i can't really tell you what to improve on, look up tutorials for your programs and stuff and try and figure out good/catchy kick, snare, high hat, ride, etc patterns, and then fill the wobbles in from there (also try and change it up throughout the song, save a bunch of different wobbles and try to use them at different times). try adding more buildup and drops and stuff too. idk, all this stuff you should know. my signature is a good example of showing a lot of variety in a song. good luck

MedikProductions wrote:all you have is a kick, snare, wobble and samples.. maybe bass. honestly you need a LOT more fillers, things to keep the song interesting. dubstep loses it's musicality if the percussive side to it is also lost (as well as an audible melody which is often disregarded). i can't really tell you what to improve on, look up tutorials for your programs and stuff and try and figure out good/catchy kick, snare, high hat, ride, etc patterns, and then fill the wobbles in from there (also try and change it up throughout the song, save a bunch of different wobbles and try to use them at different times). try adding more buildup and drops and stuff too. idk, all this stuff you should know. my signature is a good example of showing a lot of variety in a song. good luck

first a want to say thanks for that comments its helpfull. yeah dubstep loses it's musicality, i agree but keep in mind its brostep i have the intention to do more melodic stuff. Brostep is also fun, your brain go on cocaine w/o cocaine i dont take cocaine.

Lifechild wrote:pretty sick man, only thing is i feeel it cudda used more of a drop

thanks man i know 2nd drop is weak -_- thx for sc comment also

bump more ears woulb be great