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Darkside (WIP)

Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:02 pm
by jak-a-tron
So iv decided to go back and finish off a project i started quite a while ago now.
Iv changed bits and pieces like little breakdowns etc. But i would just like to know what else i can do to improve it.

The tune is in my signature below.

All feedback and comments will be very much appreciated and returned.

Thanks in advance :)

Re: Darkside (WIP)

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:20 am
by jak-a-tron
Anyone? :?

Even if you listened and think its shit
I would just like to know what i could change/improve.

Re: Darkside (WIP)

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:18 pm
by syrup
Not bad, i like the part at circa 1:40, when the Lfo switches...

i´d try to chuckle a little more aggy or varied synth sound on the second drop, the track sounds a bit repetitive
and it needs more weight i think, a bit lower and more powerful sub.
maybe try to come up with a little chord riff or some atmospheres.

overally i´m feeling it, nice job!

if you´re sending out 320´s i´ll be definitely interested when it´s finished :)

Re: Darkside (WIP)

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:43 pm
by Malleus
For that kind of bassline repetition can be kinda harsh on the ears. I find myself getting bored quick. Keep me hooked bruv. I think production is nice but the sub could be a bit punchier...its a little fat at the moment and just swells. Keep it up though. Still got me bobbin