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I need feedback i've been trying to make a decent track for a month now and decided to just try and get one out there.
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I don't like the intro but I want to get onto a new track and refine my style first.

Def needs a lot more seasoning, just some general improvements in mastering I'd say. I appreciated the TDK clips, pretty neat. And yeah the intro needs to be a lot more "interesting". Not necessarily in your face or crazy, just something that holds the attention, like even just some building atmosphere. Do what you can to phatten up that wobble too. I know it's hard because I'm just getting started too and I can't resample for shite, but just work on it you know? Possibilities are endless.

OK not bad for a first attempt I guess, you just really need to pad things out a little, have more going on in there, layer some parts and harmonize others.

Make it fukken phat laddy.

not bad for a first shot at all. good synths

I'm just starting out myself, so I guess I can't give too much help, but I agree with the other guys that it could use some more stuff in there to make it more interesting. I love that bass though, and I like what what you did with the LFO. What synth are you using?



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i like the bass but the transition between the intro and the rest of the tune (not really sure if it can be called a drop here) is a bit awkward. maybe a bit more variety in the drums, some more hihats etc? i'm just starting out as well so i'm sorry i can't be more precise

Atom-13 wrote:I'm just starting out myself, so I guess I can't give too much help, but I agree with the other guys that it could use some more stuff in there to make it more interesting. I love that bass though, and I like what what you did with the LFO. What synth are you using?

Just a thor with lotsa effects and shiz.
This was all made in reason so resampling is kind of out of the question for me xD I'm going to start a new track soon hopefully better and in Ableton.

Airr wrote: This was all made in reason so resampling is kind of out of the question for me

Wrong, its stupid easy.
Why don't you just solo the bassline and export some bits to wav, then load the wavs into an nnxt?

good start. you definitely need to switch up the drums more. I got really bored with the kick.