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Kiev - Star Eyes
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:01 pm
by kievccs
Ez, I'm posting this new dub clip i did a couple of night ago, just to see how useful or worthless is this dubs feedbacks thread. Since i have lots of months without using dfs i realized some changes were aplied in the forum, in this case well... the members tracks for feedbacks [whatever month].
Please enjoy! I hope this works
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Re: Kiev - Star Eyes
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:44 pm
by RmoniK
Lovin it mate, it's a shame you haven't had feedback yet. Niiiiiiiiice sub in this, reminds me of Kromestar's "my sound" album. I love the "pew" on the off beat every two bars. i actually only have one remark, you should put a breakdown somewhere. Not because it gets repetitive, because you just keep adding new elements, just because i'm expect one, right at the moment you fade out. Just something where you beat stops or becomes very simplistic; and then drop the bass again, but not as long as the build up in the first part, just the final part of it. That would be epic.
Cheers mate, wish i had the skills.
Re: Kiev - Star Eyes
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:50 pm
by kievccs
Cheers blud! Thank you for the constructive advices, yeah the track is reel simple man i had this in like 2 hrs really but still simple and solid and very good vibes, big up mate, everyone have the skills, its just perseverance and try to sound everyday better

Re: Kiev - Star Eyes
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:58 pm
by Grimenoceros
I agree with Rmonik, everything has a really great, mellow vibe and the only thing it could use is a little switch up like he mentioned. Nothing ridiculous because this is obviously a chill track, not in your face, but definitely something to shake it up for a bit, like something to wake the listener up to remind them this track is why they're relaxing so heavily lmao. Big stuff dude.
Re: Kiev - Star Eyes
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:05 pm
by kievccs
Apreciate your comment Grimenoceros, you have a point, its chilled and simple as in theres no fancy breaks and stuff but deffo could revise that and switch up a bit on breaks, BIGUP!