Page 1 of 1
Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:05 pm
by Cubicle
Really into piano as it seems.
Would love some feedback on my latest work.
Will post feedbacks on other soundclouds!
Soundcloud
Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:06 pm
by Cubicle
Bumping for some feedback
Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 11:12 pm
by Lectric
i think the horn in the intro is a bit cheesy and lacking depth, and the beat is a bit empty. all around i feel there is something missing from the over all tune. its a great start to a track tho, just not all the way there yet. keep at it!
Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:07 am
by JohnCaza
yo from a pianist's perspective, i'd try to stay in a key and your melody is simplistic / a bit cheesy. however, if that's what you're going for that's cool. also try giving the piano a trancy feel with a bit of simple delay, see if you like how it sounds.