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Constructive criticism is always appreciated ;D

Soundcloud
http://soundcloud.com/mike-huber/snap-original-mix

I think that:

@ 1:50 in you should drop most elements and form a build up.
Tighten the song structure by shortening it and sorta copying another songs arrangement.
Make the Snare and Kick the loudest, they should be in front and in center (not panned).
Do some subtractive EQing.

I like the melody.