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this is also my first post so whats good =]

Rektr-BubbleGum



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its actually pretty nice for a first track dood. good work

Pretty interesting song for a first one. For me the song needs more color. Whether its brightening up the mid range bass noise up a bit or just adding some more melody. Keep making tracks and getting better.

pretty good for a first track. really looking like dubstep. maybe you should have added something else than wobbles to give the feeling that your songs evolving. also, wobbles sound empty you should higher that mid range

Thanks everybody for the feedback really appreciate it, ill edit it , probably have it up in about a week or so..

on a sidenote, one major factor for the track coming out decent was thanks to the tips ive seen on this forum
Stay up

Needs something else to help fill the sound out in my opinion, and the wobbles sound didn't do much for me, but on the whole it's a really nice first track. Great work, I'm just starting using FL myself.

Devin676 wrote:Needs something else to help fill the sound out in my opinion, and the wobbles sound didn't do much for me, but on the whole it's a really nice first track. Great work, I'm just starting using FL myself.

yah im really not digging my intro that much anymore..i think i was just excited of my work..
im gunnah change it up and try to add a little melody throughout the track
thanks for your feedback

I agree with others great work for your first track, one thing to consider though is that perhaps instead of just increasing the mid range in the bass mix you might want to layer a harmonic exciter or something similar in there. This will beef up your mid range in perhaps a more exciting or interesting way.

Yep pretty good for a first attempt at dubstep, like others have said b4 the intro needs to be a bit more interesting and a bit more high end added. But from me!!

and another thing is
is this track leaning towards brostep?