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benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:52 pm
by lylo
oi oi!
started this earlier but not sure what im missing out on. the tune still feels very empty like in needs that extra noise.
Im really feelin bentons work at the minute so I've bassically stole his swagger and tried to make my own version. shameless.
http://soundcloud.com/lylo-uk/jake-work-in-progress
any feedback good or bad is always welcome. just want to know people thoughts.
Thanks
Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:13 pm
by hutyluty
this is sick, just commenting so i have a placeholder for when you post the finished ting

Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:36 pm
by lylo
nice one mate! glad ya like it! anything you want to change about the tune? bo
Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:16 pm
by lincoln
I think what you might be missing is a snappier snare. The snare in there is kinda weak... not saying you should put a brostep snare in there... just something a little snappier and higher pitched. And maybe a tiny bit louder. Otherwise, this tune is awesome. Great atmosphere, good rhythms, good bass. 320 when you're done please?

Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:07 pm
by lylo
lincoln wrote:I think what you might be missing is a snappier snare. The snare in there is kinda weak... not saying you should put a brostep snare in there... just something a little snappier and higher pitched. And maybe a tiny bit louder. Otherwise, this tune is awesome. Great atmosphere, good rhythms, good bass. 320 when you're done please?

yeah ive been working on this since and that snare was the first thing i thought needed sorting out. thanks for the tip anyway man.
as for the 320 i always put up my tunes for free download anyway so don't worry about that. its only fair to share

Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 5:30 pm
by lylo
hutyluty wrote:this is sick, just commenting so i have a placeholder for when you post the finished ting

here it is mate, enjoy
http://soundcloud.com/lylo-uk/jake
Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 6:14 pm
by hutyluty
cheers, bigups
i tried to make something similar here- have a listen if you like
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=194173
Re: benton influenced. feedback please
Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:12 pm
by lylo
yeah i like it. reminds me of that new loefah/pinch tune... id add a few more percussion bits in there tho. but i like the overall mood of the tune