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Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:14 pm
by iarbardv
Soundcloud
NEW TUNE IARBA LAURA DUBSTEP ROMANIA...SOME FEEDBACK!
Re: Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:27 pm
by OGP
not bad, that melody/strings part is nice, and the vocal sample sounds cool. The wobble doesn't sound good, probably get rid of it. Overall it is a bit sparse, percussion consists of only 3 'out of the box' hits. melody isn't countered by anything. I think what you have here is a practice exercise from which you can take certain elements (vocal sample, melody) and put them into something new with more intricate percussion, some nice sub etc
Re: Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:42 am
by iarbardv
tnx for your time!
Re: Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 5:14 am
by TheSoup
im liking the intro, but it definitely needs to be shorter. also, i wouldnt have the drums come back in before the drop after they cut out. i like the wobble sound, but the whole bass riff in the beginning is a half-step to high. try lowering it a half-step, youll see what i mean. another thing, is i would flesh out the drums a little more with some hihat, and maybe had a heavier snare... good start though, all it needs is a few adjustments and some mixing. nice work!
Re: Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:24 am
by iarbardv
yea the drums need something ...some friend also told this to me...they are kinda simple...tnx for your time and advice!
Re: Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA
Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 7:58 am
by iarbardv
bump!