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First tune I am finally happy with

give it to me hard guys....i want the truth

Ill reciprocate on any of your tracks aswell


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Sounds good man, intro is a little long I think, and the drop could hit a bit harder if it had a bit of a stronger build up and maybe the volume was bumped up on it. The drops can feel a little lagging to me, it might just be personal taste but I'd like to hear this with some new bass synths being introduced here and there, it feels a little like I'm hearing the whole synth the whole way through just with different automation, a few new ones could really spice it up a lot. Sorry if any of that sounds harsh, not meant to be, overall it's a decent tune.

basically, everything kaiori said, but also - dont be afraid to bring the drums up in the mix. dont be afraid to turn them up, loud drums are good in a dubstep tune, and here they sound kinda weak. otherwise, i really like everything else. nice work!

kaiori breathe wrote:Sounds good man, intro is a little long I think, and the drop could hit a bit harder if it had a bit of a stronger build up and maybe the volume was bumped up on it. The drops can feel a little lagging to me, it might just be personal taste but I'd like to hear this with some new bass synths being introduced here and there, it feels a little like I'm hearing the whole synth the whole way through just with different automation, a few new ones could really spice it up a lot. Sorry if any of that sounds harsh, not meant to be, overall it's a decent tune.

+1

Also I feel the sub could pound much harder than it does, but a very good first try.

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http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=192829

this is also my first tune, but be warned, it is not quite as chill.

kaiori breathe wrote:Sounds good man, intro is a little long I think, and the drop could hit a bit harder if it had a bit of a stronger build up and maybe the volume was bumped up on it. The drops can feel a little lagging to me, it might just be personal taste but I'd like to hear this with some new bass synths being introduced here and there, it feels a little like I'm hearing the whole synth the whole way through just with different automation, a few new ones could really spice it up a lot. Sorry if any of that sounds harsh, not meant to be, overall it's a decent tune.

Funny how you mentioned everything I was thinking, I was having real trouble with the drops, thank you for the feedback your tunes kept me on your soundcloud for an hour so theres not much to be said

TheSoup wrote:basically, everything kaiori said, but also - dont be afraid to bring the drums up in the mix. dont be afraid to turn them up, loud drums are good in a dubstep tune, and here they sound kinda weak. otherwise, i really like everything else. nice work!

damn I did not even notice,

*fader up*

Deep in sand is fire! great bass and i love how the rhythm rolls throughout the whole clip, lovin it.

Monstro wrote:

kaiori breathe wrote:Sounds good man, intro is a little long I think, and the drop could hit a bit harder if it had a bit of a stronger build up and maybe the volume was bumped up on it. The drops can feel a little lagging to me, it might just be personal taste but I'd like to hear this with some new bass synths being introduced here and there, it feels a little like I'm hearing the whole synth the whole way through just with different automation, a few new ones could really spice it up a lot. Sorry if any of that sounds harsh, not meant to be, overall it's a decent tune.

+1

Also I feel the sub could pound much harder than it does, but a very good first try.

Feedback for feedback?

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=192829

this is also my first tune, but be warned, it is not quite as chill.

Yeah man ive spent COUNTLESS hours trying to get a good sub, thats my favorite part so I can hardly please myself, I had just changed the sub too a more "kick boom"ish sound instead of just the same wub of the bassline but Im still unsatisfied.

Colosuss
intro: great, love how the initial bass is gobbled up by the rest of ur mix till the drop
drop: hits hard but I feel a little bit of silence before and a crash cymbal on the boom would accent it great, and maybe try taking out the melody when it first drops and bring it back in after 16? just my thoughts brotha
drums: maybe some sidechain or subtractive eq(or maybe just turn faders up) to make that snare(!!!!!) and hats punch through and youd be bangin! and more crash cymbals!

just feedback from someone who has no idea what hes talking about! lovin it regardless