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[FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 7:49 am
by Bonz
Looking for some feedback on the latest...
just a preview...sort of unfinished.
drop me a comment if u feelin it.
timed comments welcome
http://soundcloud.com/bonzeecleaven/tim ... nce-bonzee
Thanks guys!
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 12:14 pm
by Bonz
BUMP
BUMP
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 5:49 pm
by T-Flex
Hey Bonz! I wish I could say nicer things but this track has a long ways to go. All the parts that you've written don't mesh well or match up with the original track, they are not in the same key or scale as the original song so it sounds super off. That being said, your drop sounds pretty sick and I think if you transposed all your instruments to match the song and did some major re-working, your track could sound super awesome.
In case it helps the song is in the key of C# minor. The main hook's chord change is E major, B major, Ab minor, C# minor. Keep at it!
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 1:56 am
by Bonz
ok im hearin ya.
just to be clear though which part are we talkin about?
the piano chords or???
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Sun May 15, 2011 9:43 am
by Bonz
ok redone again....last one sucked i know....
let me know if its any better.
feedback would be fantastic.
cheers!
http://soundcloud.com/bonzeecleaven/tim ... nce-bonzee
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 6:33 am
by T-Flex
Better! The piano is good for sure, but what I was talking about was the wobble basses and such that you've added. They're all based off the key of C and don't mesh too well or complement the original track.
keep at it man
Re: [FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit
Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 2:48 am
by Bonz
Ohh I'm not tryin to mimic the melody of the original.
I get u tho. Only the intro was coming off similar.
Cheers brutha.