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the bassline gets a tad monotonous and the simple sinewave bass is kinda played out. i do like the drums though. nice swing feel to them.

The wobbles could be a tad louder, but other than that It's okay for a starter. Try to get some melodies in there next time.

The drums sound a little bit flat and lifeless, if put a compressor and some reverb on them and keep fiddling with it till it sounds right it should make them sound a bit more naturalistic. If you do a bit of eqing to separate the sounds out it'll come out a bit fresher and cleaner (especially for the kick and the sub). Otherwise just keep at it, its cliche, but practice makes perfect- its certainly much better than my first attempts.

The kick and snare sound wrong. Maybee some eq can fix it or some other samples, but what the fuck do I know, I just made my first dubstep tune too!