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HI IM 15 AND I JUST MADE MY FIRST SONG. I NEED FEED-BACK. THIS SONG WAS PLAYED BY DATSIK LIVE.

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hahahah this has to be a joke right?

LOFL at all the comments being by you

We're in the same boat. Just not the same boat where I place all the comments dude.

DJ UBER PHILTH wrote:THIS SONG WAS PLAYED BY DATSIK LIVE

If that is the case, then surely that's all the endorsement you need as to whether it's any good or not?

PaulP wrote:hahahah this has to be a joke right?

NO BUT NO ONE HAS GIVEN ME FEEDBACK YET. FEEDBACK PLS!

FORTHCOMING ON ROTTUN!!!!!

DJ UBER PHILTH wrote:FORTHCOMING ON ROTTUN!!!!!

If that is correct well then i guess filth is starting to kill itself alot quicker than we assumed......

lmao not bad
not nearly as bad as some

Okay, now that you have a 3 minute track, go back and add in new layers with new synth leads, effects, samples, etc. Go through every wobble section you have and make them each similar, but distinctly different. It's all about making your audience want to listen to the track. Change the drum beat in certain areas (Sorry if you did, I didn't listen through a second time yet to check that yet). Just keep changing things and make sure they sound good and go with the flow of the song. You definitely need more movement in your bass. Sounds good though. You have the beginnings of what could be a good song. you just need to tweak it a bit. I would also suggest duplicating your wobble bass and tweaking the second one to be more of a sub bass, with the same notes and automation and everything. This way you get a fuller sound.

Things I enjoyed:
The wobble bass was pretty awesome! I think it sounds good, it's just not "full" yet. You can fix this easily!
The drum beat is pretty nifty. I thought it was pretty cool. Better than what I could do at 15!
The synth was pretty cool. It was more of a percussive synth for sure, but you need more synths, with maybe one or two different melodies and you need them to switch on and off being layered over eachother and what not.
Also, definitely EQ - Mix - Reverb - Master and make sure you export the song to have the proper ID3 tags! You're on your way!


-T

DJ UBER PHILTH hahahaha

he goes in once again!
man datsik doesnt even deserve to play these tunes live!

What software do you use?
Maybe I can give you some better than generic tips.. .although you should probably stop saying people play your tracks, Im pretty sure everyone thinks that gay, even as a joke.

I get the impression that this is a troll, but his track seriously sounds better than most of the other stuff around here.

WHATS WITH THE CAPS! No seriously.

"DJ UBER PHILTH"
"Bring on the Filth"

Troll harder. If this is a serious post, I am sorry.

this thread is full of win! good job on the track, if your really 15 and this is your first track Keep it up and keep improving! But dont say datsik played your music... cuz we all know thats not true, unless you gave him some really good drugz

Such on obvious troll... why are you feedbacking this.

I applaud you troll, but i am not fooled.

EDIT:
The post below me puts up a valid point, and even though i still think this is an obvious troll, i did listen to your song.
I might as well humor you and add some feedback.

Perhaps some variation on your second drop, maybe add in some ambience or a light arpeggiator. Switch up the LFO's a bit. It just gets pretty repetitive.
Sub Bass is also needed aswell. Just add a Sine wave synth in there shud sound great!

im not trolling. but yeah. ok troll nonetheless

Pred3 wrote:Such on obvious troll... why are you feedbacking this.

I applaud you troll, but i am not fooled.

Best way to deal with trolls is to treat them as if they are serious. This way you don't even screw someone who's not trolling and really does want feedback, and if it is a troll, he gets nothing out of it because all you did was give some minor compliments and tell him how to improve his track.

Problem solved, no more trolls. TADA!

Forums will be cleaner!

Just keep trollin' trollin' trollin'. Just keep them doggies trollin'..