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D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:17 pm
by DickheadD
Hello guys, here's my first attempt of dubstep song,I will be happy if you give me any feedback. And feel free to download :-) Thanks!
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Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:30 am
by paradigm001
it sounds like epic dubstep. Pretty much anything with a slow kick and snare and a synth qualifies as dubstep I was expecting some hard shit with the title of the song but you went the opposite.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:33 am
by paradigm001
Id say its worthy of being signed. Shit alot of tracks on here are good quality and should get signed. What are the labels waiting for?

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:13 pm
by DickheadD
Thank you,but I dont know if it's good to signed,it's my first attempt of dubstep and it's not well mastered.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:43 pm
by paradigm001
oh well I say fuck it and run it through a multiband compressor thatll fix it

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:06 pm
by DickheadD
Ok,I'll try it and then post here,thanks for advice :h:

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 2:56 pm
by paradigm001
no problem theres one in Adobe Audition and I think Cubase but I dont know what software your using.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:06 pm
by DickheadD
I work in Reason 5,there is 4 or 8 band compressor

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:11 pm
by Zelik
I gotta say, this is pretty damn good. It sounds full. The chorus sounds great. The instruments/synths vary and match well together.
It sounds like it could use some polishing up on the mastering part of it, but that's typical.
I would only change the drop a bit. Add a crash or hit-type sound immediately entering the drop. Maybe use a filter on the piano and decrease the cutoff. Maybe try adding a sustained note on a string, pad, or bass and pitch and volume slide it down. Just things like that to make the drop more present.
Overall, I enjoyed it.
And I followed :D

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:16 pm
by paradigm001
the mastering compressor is the one you want. It has seperate controlls for the lows mids and highs

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:21 pm
by paradigm001
you have a pretty sic tune there Zelic. I couldnt find your original thread.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:26 pm
by paradigm001
that one bass sound at the end of your phrase sounds like a skrillex sound. Its the thor?

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:42 pm
by DickheadD
Zelic: Haha it's funny,because my first version of drop was exactly same as you wrote :lol: Thank you for feedback :U:
Paradigm: Yes it's thor, three different wavetable osc,scream4,EQ,unision,and finally sawtooth LFO(4/4)==>position knob of oscillators :dunce:

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:44 pm
by paradigm001
I hear the formant filter. Thats a monster synth though, its fuckin sic if you get into it.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:45 pm
by paradigm001
I gotta try writing with the thor, but I payed like 150 for RAZOR and another 500 bucks for REAKTOR so im inclined to use those.

Re: D!ckhead - Reality of war

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:08 pm
by DickheadD
Try it sometimes,it's not very difficult and you can do a lot of sound with it. Every my synths is made in Thor,I think it's very underrated,because everyone "need" to work in Massive etc.I found it very creative :W: