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Davwuh - Untold (140 future garage dark/chilled)

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:33 pm
by davwuh
Soundcloud

constructive criticism and praise welcome :h:

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:37 pm
by ZimmermanStudios
Oh yeah, praise welcome? =P

Not my kind of music, but good production, and I really like your intro.

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 3:03 am
by davwuh
cheers.. aye, always up for some praise :h:

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 2:12 pm
by davwuh
anymore responses?

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 4:08 pm
by particle-jim
cant really comment on the bass coz im listening through shit speakers but everything else sounds nice man, decent amount of shuffle & skip in your drumwork, nice stuff

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:58 pm
by Specters
the tune is pretty good. I like the drum work the most. I think the bass could be turned down a little bit. Also probably more pads or chords it the tune to give it a unique feel since you really only have the sub and that one pad, probably more like what is going on around 4.52. The arp toward the end doesn't really fit and just comes in and goes out...didn't really understand that part.

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 1:27 am
by GOOSENSEI
Untold-----BIG PRAISE :h: real dope tune vocals are wicked!! really feelin that one man :W: :W: :W: :W: ,,,evil sword not really my cup of tea, kind of screechy if you know what I mean
anyway keep it up Untold is definitely a banger... :corndance:

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:06 am
by paradigm001
Like it so far, the snare can be turned up. Vocal fits. Cool chill vibe. I like the lowpass filter running in and out. I think the arps are fine. Maybe the note selection could be different but other then that a good chill tune.

Re: 140 future garage dark/chilled

Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:54 am
by Eludis
The drums are a bit clean for my liking in terms of garage, but that's just a matter of taste. I like strange percussion sounds in garage/chill stuff, think Burial's 'Near Dark'. Otherwise, good stuff, keep it up. ^^