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Greetings everyone, I'll be posting a tune from a friend of mine who goes by the name Methy. He would have posted this himself but he failed at creating an account on here due to the security question being a hater.
Methy - 'This is my first tune and it's no where near being complete. I'd like to get some feedback on how it sounds at the moment. Criticism is more then welcome.'
No need to scream at him for the Intro/Outro as he knows it's stale at the moment.

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Hmm. :S

That first sound is too loud. It needs to be compressed. But its your first tune. The drums need to come up and fit in the mix. Nothing else is going on. I would lose that bass sound, its kinda generic. Or change its sound.