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Work in progress

Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 10:32 pm
by Lowgain
Not really dubstep, but here's a track I started today and have been working on the last little while:

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http://min.us/mdR9RVx

Thinking it may be about done structure-wise and I'm looking to tighten up the mix and add some more life to what is there now, keep it interesting. Let me know what you think!

Re: Work in progress

Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:33 pm
by LouisCypher
Honestly I'm not sure how to critique this as I'm not really sure what you are going for with this. Its pretty cool I guess although its pretty minimal and honestly not very exciting. I would def put some more work in on it.

Re: Work in progress

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:59 am
by Lowgain
Would you say its more the overall structure or a lack of variation in the parts that's making it less interesting? I'm probably gonna fiddle around and see if I can stick some more little one-off changes in and such. Overall its minimal yea, I'm not sure whether or not I want to keep it that way -

As far as the overall mix goes, anything seem off?

Re: Work in progress

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:20 pm
by Lowgain
Added a newer version of the track to the original post - not fully sure if I like all the vocal samples I put in or not but there is at least some more variation now.

Any thoughts?