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Terra - Heavy Smoke (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:42 pm
by TerraRiddim
Help me out and rate this tune 1 - 10 I wanna see where you guys think I'm at
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Re: RATE THIS TRACK 1 - 10 (Please, Almost NO Effort Require

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:37 pm
by TerraRiddim
Bump

Re: RATE THIS TRACK 1 - 10 (Please, Almost NO Effort Require

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:44 pm
by ninthy4
8/10, I really like it at 0.30 but at 2.09 it get alittle messy I think

Re: RATE THIS TRACK 1 - 10 (Please, Almost NO Effort Require

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:33 pm
by TerraRiddim
ninthy4 wrote:8/10, I really like it at 0.30 but at 2.09 it get alittle messy I think
Yeah with all of the reverb and delays it gets a bit cluttered and noisy, I might try to thin it out a little bit in that section ^^

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 4:55 pm
by TerraRiddim
One last bump

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:23 pm
by darigan
Hard to rate, I think it has the potential to be really great track, nice beat, nice bass, nice groove and apart form that middle section where its gets a little messy its really well mixed. You've got your solid 8 or 16 bar groove, I think where this track needs work is turn that couple of bars groove into a full track, the whole first section sounds fine I feel it starts to drag a little after that.

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:41 am
by TerraRiddim
darigan wrote:Hard to rate, I think it has the potential to be really great track, nice beat, nice bass, nice groove and apart form that middle section where its gets a little messy its really well mixed. You've got your solid 8 or 16 bar groove, I think where this track needs work is turn that couple of bars groove into a full track, the whole first section sounds fine I feel it starts to drag a little after that.
Thank you, some legit constructive criticism is much appreciated!

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:48 am
by AnomiK
chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:19 pm
by TerraRiddim
AnomiK wrote:chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.
I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:09 am
by AnomiK
TerraRiddim wrote:
AnomiK wrote:chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.
I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.
thanks dude. swing...so give them a better pattern to groove to?

Re: Terra Riddim - Indica Dub

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 3:23 pm
by TerraRiddim
AnomiK wrote:
TerraRiddim wrote:
AnomiK wrote:chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.
I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.
thanks dude. swing...so give them a better pattern to groove to?
Well with standard more wobble and electro bass oriented dubstep the emphasis is obviously on the kick snare nod up and down when it comes to the drums, so depending on what you're using (I produce in logic) you can either account for it by had or quantize the notes with some natural latency to them that ends up really adding to the back and forth movement of the track

Re: Terra - Heavy Smoke (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:27 am
by xx773xx
Yeah the delayed keys/pad gets a little muddy with everything else, but other than that, it is a damn neat track to groove to. EQ some of the harsh stuff out of the feedback and it should be sounding sick. I love the Cheech & Chong sample with the awkward silence in the middle before the messy bit. Cool stuff man!

8/10.

Re: Terra - Heavy Smoke (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:33 pm
by TerraRiddim
xx773xx wrote:Yeah the delayed keys/pad gets a little muddy with everything else, but other than that, it is a damn neat track to groove to. EQ some of the harsh stuff out of the feedback and it should be sounding sick. I love the Cheech & Chong sample with the awkward silence in the middle before the messy bit. Cool stuff man!

8/10.
Much appreciated man, I'll definitely try to do that when I'm working on the final mastering! :) By the way I plan on throwing this tracks mastered version as well as some other remasters and brand new tunes up for DL on my soundcloud after I get up to 200 followers if you'd care to help me :) Big ups everybody

Re: Terra - Heavy Smoke (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:45 am
by Barbosa1405
Like the tune , not sure where i would put on a scale of 1-10, but like it and nice bass sound ! second drop isnt what is should be for the first part though, does get a bit messy....

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