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Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:11 am
by Carpediem

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:33 am
by Barbosa1405
Like this one, powerful track, maybe a bit too compressed though, not much dynamic in there.. good work though !

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:33 pm
by Carpediem
Thx for the feedback dude, few things im working on still, only have a couple of months under my belt as far as making music and dubstep...but i feel like i'm getting there....so all advice and any help anyone can throw out, i would appreciate.

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:32 pm
by Woody D
Love it mate. Fancy making it downloadable? ;)

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:50 pm
by Carpediem
Pretty soon it will be, just want a little bit more feedback. but add me on youtube or soundcloud and keep in touch =)

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:04 pm
by Kinky
Yeah man, nice tune, it's just too cluttered. There needs to be more headroom in the track, just re-mix the whole thing. The tune's solid as fuck though, great tones, great notes, solid progression. I really like it, it's just too cluttered. :l

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:49 pm
by Carpediem
thx for the feedback kinky. when you say remix do you mean like tweak the patterns a bit?

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:01 am
by vCookie
i will download this when it's done. it just sounds a bit too tinny. tighten it up like the others have said and i'll download it

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:50 am
by Echomaker
Loving this.

As with everyone, it's just really the mixing and mastering that needs work. Compositionally, I love it.

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 5:50 am
by almostskate100
You got a lot of sweet melodies in here dude. One suggestion might be to vary up the drum patterns a bit. First idea that came to mind was maybe taking out some of the fast hi-hat hits for a couple bars, kinda have a breakdown section. Might give it some more impact if you slow down the hats for a bit, yaddamean?

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:36 am
by Carpediem
yeah i na what chu mean

Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 7:52 pm
by Carpediem
Update^^^^^^^^^