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Hey.

So I've been making Dubstep-tunes since December and this summer I made a track I actually feel kinda happy with. I'm hard on myself and don't think anything I produce sound especially good, so therefor I need some help with constructive critizism if that would be alright.

The mixdown is kinda bad, since I used a pair of worthless headphones from early 2003 and the track is unmastered. I've got myself a pair of monitors now, though, so the mixdown will be improved and the track will also be mastered within a few weeks. But before I start re-doing my mix, I'd like to know your opinions on my track and maybe tips on what to change so I can adjust those things before I mix and master the track. When it's done and mastered it'll be up for free download aswell!

So, after this wall of text (which I am sorry for) here is the track!
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Hope you'll enjoy!

You're really selling your track there in the first few sentences.. sounds good mix wise here, listening on good headphones . not feeling the string stab much, but I like that you return that generic wobble somewhat distorted in the second bass section, it has got all the genre cliches I'm familiar with, maybe you can push it outside the familiarity and experiment a little, don't be afraid to wonder off the known pad