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Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:23 am
by paradigm001
Soundcloud

anybody care to give me some criticism or feedback? I could use it.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:13 pm
by DJ Sampletank
Hey man, enjoyed that, only thing I'd suggest is maybe cleaning up a little at the heavy part, I dunno, maybe its the crap setup on this pc but it sounds a bit muddy. I really like it though, the notes, the layout and the mix seems good too.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:49 pm
by paradigm001
Yea thanks man, I have to go clean it up a little.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:59 pm
by paradigm001
uploaded a new version without the beg synth muddying up the bass section. I think the snare might be to big...hmm snare might be too loud too? Help me out

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:19 pm
by medjwa
Haha this reminds me of Transformers. Sounds awesome, though.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:48 am
by paradigm001
thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:43 am
by IC0N
I feel like a lower pitched snare along with the reverb you have might fit a little better overall. It might just be my opinion but it sounds like the snare and reverb sticks out alot.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:48 pm
by paradigm001
yea your right, thats what Im struggling with. Ive tried lots of snares, I think im gonna back off the verb and lower the snare, Im gonna post an update soon.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:00 am
by medjwa
paradigm001 wrote:thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?
Haha only the movie man. I've never heard the tune before. Who's it by?

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:59 pm
by DJ Sampletank
Hey dude sounds badass. I like the snare, it's different from the norm. Hit me up when you get this one finished.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:52 am
by paradigm001
Soundcloud

This one I changed the snare, which one is better?

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:54 pm
by IC0N
I like the new snare more than the first.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 5:18 pm
by paradigm001
Thanks icon, did you read DJ Sample Tanks response? He said what he liked about the track was the snare! Im gonna have to make two versions of this tune. Each with a different snare. One will be a DJ Sampletank exclusive with the old loud snare.

thanks again

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 9:45 pm
by paradigm001
medjwa wrote:
paradigm001 wrote:thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?
Haha only the movie man. I've never heard the tune before. Who's it by?

i dunno theres different versions floating around there, I heard a DJ one night mix in some transformer samples and I think thats what sound I was hearing.
Anyway check this guy out. His tune isint bad.

http://youtu.be/VyCznbIlxwo

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm
by aboley5
Fuck man that's awsome. I just posted mine. Put it to shame ahaha

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm
by aboley5
Fuck man that's awsome. I just posted mine. Put it to shame ahaha

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm
by paradigm001
update
Soundcloud

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:24 pm
by paradigm001
updateSoundcloud

here I have it untill the second drop. I want the second drop to be nuts.

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:53 pm
by tdmrecords
Hi

I represent TDM Records I would be interested in hearing more of your music.

please email demo@tdmrecords.co.uk

www.soundcloud.com/tdmrecords

we do dnb and dubstep as well as other music

facebook

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002067805116

thanks

steve @ TDM

Re: Paradigm- Human Error Song

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:31 am
by paradigm001
thanks